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Assassin Instructor pt.1

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Assassin Instructor pt.1

Postby Just Silver » Jul 16th, '10, 04:38

Pt.1 of a freeverse Assassin story



Started in egypt a mind of Pharaoh
Legends feed it, tomahawks and arrows
Martyrs spark your marrow, snap all joints
Attached on point my grapple hook conjoined
With the wall half destroyed to make my vision void
Listen then deploy Slit him then the boys
Will get theres next, simply under joy
Wall jumping sprints up vertical objects
Recall something big near the nerves in my optics
I was served with some options
I can try to terminate, before i determine weight
My turn be late, i can learn the fate
My heart burns to race, so I turn to the face
A similar man that came before me
It was my instructor he engaged this whole thing
Started by giving tests that would phase me
Departed came back in stance with melee
I must beat my master that greatest of hopes
He can chase but he won't, see me under my smoke
Threw a diversion his way and angle
He ran and lost his sandles, slipped like wax on candles
Hover over his body to see what he has
Reached and opened a bag, an ivory gold molded cat
Engraved was a congratulations, and checked off preparations
The day had come and past, getting colder, the sun is fast
Oh how I wonder that, he was on my back
Now evening is dusk glory im eating it up
Still haven't found out why my teacher was fucked
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Re: Assassin Instructor pt.1

Postby Yah-hah » Jul 16th, '10, 06:04

Ha I actually dug it man it was cool. I like the poetic vibe plus the story. The vocab was cool too. Overall though it was dope :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Assassin Instructor pt.1

Postby Just Silver » Jul 16th, '10, 18:09

Yah-hah wrote:Ha I actually dug it man it was cool. I like the poetic vibe plus the story. The vocab was cool too. Overall though it was dope :y:

Thanks guy :y:
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