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Shit Goes Wrong

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Shit Goes Wrong

Postby ChronicJon » Jul 23rd, '10, 09:30

A little verse on the Stay Wide Awake beat I made while I had no internet connection. 2 more verses together when I'm done with the last one :y:

[Hook]
When you cannot erase, what can sometimes be fatal mistakes,
Ya, may panic for days, and you just sit back thinking patience pays,
But, know shit happens, you never know when life gets to attacking,
Then, your trapped and, you just wanna die by the hand of a gat and,
You start to chant, it goes like this, oh dear god, my life’s over,
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh,
Get the blades, so it can end slower, Shit goes wrong…

[Verse 1]
Here’s a little riddling story that needs to be spoken,
Once there was a smoking hot babe open for eloping,
This girl, she smoked coke and almost anything that was dope and,
She was on potent drugs making her fade away and start cloaking,
Into a maniac with a zany act, where everywhere she acts crazy at,
She won’t take care of her son cause she’s too much of a lazy brat,
She has no mother cause they slugged her along with her young brother,
And she had a lover who happened to be a serial rapist so he stuck her,
To a bed and began to rape and laugh while she’s yelping and screaming,
Poor girl just couldn’t escape the ass of the rapist from hell and the demon,
Probably thinks it’s just great to have this person helping his dream and,
She would become a slave for cash her body everyday selling for semen,
Every day she’d be sexed and beat, plus she just got a lot of stds including aids,
Her life will no longer hexed to be, cause she killed herself with a gun and two blades,

[Hook]
When you cannot erase, what can sometimes be fatal mistakes,
Ya, may panic for days, and you just sit back thinking patience pays,
But, know shit happens, you never know when life gets to attacking,
Then, your trapped and, you just wanna die by the hand of a gat and,
You start to chant, it goes like this, oh dear god, my life’s over,
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh,
Get the blades so it can end slower, Shit goes wrong…

Yes I know I kinda jacked the whole rape concept but it was necessary for this type of song. The 2nd and 3rd verse will have nothing to do with rape. It's just an example I'm giving :8)
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Re: Shit Goes Wrong

Postby ChronicJon » Jul 25th, '10, 02:02

That isn't poetry you fucking idiot.
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Re: Shit Goes Wrong

Postby ChronicJon » Jul 26th, '10, 03:07

:'(
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Re: Shit Goes Wrong

Postby Robot » Jul 26th, '10, 06:23

ChronicJon wrote:That isn't poetry you fucking idiot.


LMFAO...
I never asked, cared, gave a fuck, or wanted opinions.
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