Overall I thought it was dopeLet's play.
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Re: Let's play.
by Yah-hah » Jul 28th, '10, 06:36
I think the thing that stood out the most was the flow, it was great especially in the beginning. Through text a few lines dont appear to rhyme but I know your into audio so I know that that would rhyme when you said it Overall I thought it was dope
Overall I thought it was dope
"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah
Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol
Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Let's play.
by ThomasJ » Jul 28th, '10, 09:43
That was awesome dude! 
I can't tell you how much I liked this LOL
Well,actually I can... I LOVED IT!
My fave part :
I can't tell you how much I liked this LOL
Well,actually I can... I LOVED IT!
My fave part :
chandelier candle stick gripped massacred quickness
infact it was with this, very same beat that I, mastered my hit list.. Listen
...The mortician of love, sent from above
Forced entry, the more wenchy, the more stingy I become
Been doing this for more than a quarter century, I'm just numb...
Forced entry, the more wenchy, the more stingy I become
Been doing this for more than a quarter century, I'm just numb...
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