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demented pyschotic skitzo

Postby Ka0t1c » Jul 29th, '10, 18:24

permanently burning in me is a disturbing burden
most certainly hurting, do i deserve this occurring?
i'm unsure but my journey's still whirling like topsy turvy
how much further til i stop my circling, i've got to hurry
and stop this early while my circuit's now surging
or adjourn, i'm so worried it's my turn to disperse like i'm deserting
purged from the earth
but i am worthy to exterminate germs
don't discourage me, i'm determined to resurface and serve
working to reverse your concerns before you're on the verge of biserk
then emerging in your nerves you'll grow unalert of the serpents
keep sturdy and study these words i'm inserting to become an expert
i know i sound nutty like a squirrel, but this is not about church
it's more of an emergency that surrounds the whole world...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: demented pyschotic skitzo

Postby gutawafang » Jul 30th, '10, 09:45

dope multis. dope flow.

dope vocabulary.

dope punches.

I like it. :y: :y: :y:
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Re: demented pyschotic skitzo

Postby Ka0t1c » Jul 30th, '10, 16:03

thanx!
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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