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CJ - Dreams Are Untrue

Postby ChronicJon » Jul 30th, '10, 04:23

You won't tell me what to do, what to say or how to act,
Know that I don't fucking care if you hate my style or rap,
I know for sure I'm on planet earth to accomplish my goal,
Don't care to be rich with gold, no way I can ditch my whole,
Vision for myself as a respected emcee showered in fame,
Won't let it drain me to the point people say now-yer insane,
You won't make me follow you, motherfucker I'm the leader,
If I follow ya I'd get a girl and beat her, if only I could read-a,
Map or guide to help me, while I hear my soul say sell me,
I'm dwelling cause I'm trapped inside like my soul celled me,
Maybe I'm just another teenager bitching about dumb shit,
But, If I had only one wish, I would just wish for some prick,
To come doubt my skill, so I can put 'em in my housing grill,
And begin to roast and burn these suckers down 'til killed,
I have so much anger in me that my hearts screams for me,
Untrue human imagination, that's what a dream means to me,
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Re: CJ - Dreams Are Untrue

Postby gutawafang » Jul 30th, '10, 09:42

Pretty simple to me. Looks like you didn't put in that much effort man. No offense, I see it that way. xD

The idea is there though. I mean, they were on point at least. It's more like a rant to me.
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Re: CJ - Dreams Are Untrue

Postby ChronicJon » Jul 30th, '10, 19:39

It's the result of boredom at 1 AM :sweating:

Anyways thanks Guta
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Re: CJ - Dreams Are Untrue

Postby dR3 » Aug 1st, '10, 01:23

This sucks Sac's ballsack. No just kidding, it's pretty good for an amateur like yourself. :coffee:
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Re: CJ - Dreams Are Untrue

Postby ChronicJon » Aug 1st, '10, 01:24

dR.dR3 wrote:This sucks Sac's ballsack. No just kidding, it's pretty good for an amateur like yourself. :coffee:

I'm a veretan :shifty:

And I can do better :facepalm
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