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General Freeverse (Rage & J CrackRockz warning)

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General Freeverse (Rage & J CrackRockz warning)

Postby mcZu » Aug 3rd, '10, 07:45

Stop coming at us Rage, you couldn’t win in your wildest dreams
Attacking a General is suicide, ammunition at this childish scene
Call me Zack de la Rocha, ‘cause you’ll witness Rage against a machine
Wolverine style, I slice you up ‘cause I’m dope like crack rocks
And I’ll crack CrackRockz, put his back in a backpack, locked
Leave him shocked, back to back with bags filled with mad tox
‘cause J couldn’t be a dope writer on the internet if he teamed up with Maddox
You be home putting on your female wig like a stale pig
Running around the block talking ‘bout touching green on some Shego shit
Bitch alter ego, guess that scene describes why you’re on an ego trip
Feeble bitch, you couldn’t spit the bare truth on a streaker fest
I’m not God on Sunday, but I’ll end it and give you weak some rest
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
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Re: General Freeverse (Rage & J CrackRockz warning)

Postby J Roc » Aug 4th, '10, 06:00

Thats whats up ..... heres the deal tho

I'll get @ u Zoo ... i just gotta pull 32 nice lines outta my ass on another site in the next 5 Days so i'lll get at you afterwards.


Nice Shit Tho Homie ... Your Like a Young J Roc With Suma Those Punchlines You have there :whistle:
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Re: General Freeverse (Rage & J CrackRockz warning)

Postby mcZu » Aug 4th, '10, 14:09

Take your time, man. This section needs a lil' bit of beef. All in good sports, though. Oh, and I've been doing those punch lines for ages, lol. Don't flatter yourself, hehehe. I expect you to come with something good.
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Re: General Freeverse (Rage & J CrackRockz warning)

Postby mcZu » Aug 7th, '10, 01:03

Bump.
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Re: General Freeverse (Rage & J CrackRockz warning)

Postby classthe_king » Aug 7th, '10, 02:00

Wait, what happened
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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