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The Light Bringer

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 3rd, '10, 23:47

Not a religious man, never felt the hands of God
The bible molded you, me, I'll never bear facades
Follow your golden rule, me, I'll never spare the rod
Do what you're told to do or go into the Land Of Nod

dare to walk free, you're never chained to the lines
don't listen to fictitious diction from plagiarist scribes
the founding fathers of our country had atheist minds
ignorance is bliss and right where conspiracy thrives

peer through my eyes, don't be blind to all the lessons
If God was perfect he couldn't spawn our imperfections
create a finite mess till the dawn of Armageddon
the slaughter of the lambs with an army drawn from Heaven
Your brain is child's play to manipulate.
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Re: The Light Bringer

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 3rd, '10, 23:50

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Re: The Light Bringer

Postby classthe_king » Aug 3rd, '10, 23:51

Fa-Q wrote:Spyder

:laughing: :laughing: :laughing:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: The Light Bringer

Postby Yah-hah » Aug 4th, '10, 03:50

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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: The Light Bringer

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 4th, '10, 03:50

I don't get it
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Re: The Light Bringer

Postby ChronicJon » Aug 4th, '10, 04:01

Fa-Q wrote:Spyder

:laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing:
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Re: The Light Bringer

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 6th, '10, 04:30

McMaybe wrote:Pretty interesting stuff. I love the topic, everything was great about this.


I took the most close minded atheist stance possible. It was really fun to write.
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Re: The Light Bringer

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 6th, '10, 05:42

SiiNiDE wrote:I like pieces like this. Good shit, man. I was looking forward to seeing something from yo.


Oh, but you don't have enough multies or punchlines. Make sure your pieces are crammed with nonsensical multies. That is what makes a good song, afterall.


Thanks man, and it's an Eminem forum lol, of course everyone is gonna try to be Kool G Rap.
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