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- Brain_Destroyer "The Ending Road."

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- Brain_Destroyer "The Ending Road."

Postby Brain_Destroyer » Aug 8th, '10, 02:51

The road ends, leaves me with a blank thought,
The road I walk on is worthless for me now,
My feet hurt, I'm tired and I'm cold,
I haven't slept in days. But I'm still hear thinking what lead me through this place,
Days go bye & yet I'm still standing on this empty space,
I think it's time for me to leave and just go home,
But what is going home gonna do for me,
Stay there and slice my wrist and watch me bleed constantly,
Or hearing the sounds of my baby brother getting tortured in his sleep,
This isn't the life I wish to live in,
Maybe when the road ended it was telling me something,
Maybe it's telling me to go back home & just keep fighting,
Hopefully the answer pops up when I leave,
I start to walk away but I just can't breathe anymore,
I feel like somebody has there arms around my neck,
Who ever this person is, is strangling me hard and wanting me to face death,
So, I stop everything I could do to let this person off of me,
But he just keeps constantly grabbing me,
5 minutes have passed & yet I'm still here being strangled,
Then I think to myself my life was nothing but one big fail,
So I let this person do whatever he want's to me,
He tightens his hands harder around my neck & sets me free.


(Free, in other words. Means dead, in this story.)
Cause some things just, don't change/ it's better when they stay the same/ although the whole world, knows your name/ so on a, bigger stage they came to see you spit your game/ woah-ooh so, it shouldn't be difficult, to explain/ just why you came back again/ you hate the fame, love the game/ cold as ice, you remain/ fuck em' all, tell em' all eat shit here we go again.
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Re: - Brain_Destroyer "The Ending Road."

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 8th, '10, 04:22

I think you have the content and story line down pat you just need to use heavier rhymes. I'm not saying multi over load is a must but you don't even have a lot of end rhymes in here. If you revised it with rap in mind I think it would turn out alot better.
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