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When I'm Gone

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When I'm Gone

Postby tjb » Aug 10th, '10, 16:25

whipped this up at like 1 this mornin. feedback? thanks.

mmm mmm mmm mmm
better not miss me when im gone
mmm mmm mmm mmm
please dont miss me when im gone
see ive seen disaster, and death Amongst laughter
but these miracles happen, an im comin back so
dont miss me when im gone

so i tried to tell her, even amongst the rubble
wed reach the top thru the cellar, make it thru the struggle
theres touchdowns in r future, whether or not we fumble
we'll make it all the way, if its a year or just a day
im just being clear, this is something i had to say
cuz ive got fear for the fam, theres way to much at stake
wish i could set this life on cruise,take a break for just a day
honestly i aint got a clue, fuck if ive never had a taste
of the feeling your kids are feelin when theres no food on there plate
and when 2 days have gone by an my baby hasnt ate
an the panick sets in send in this final mixtape
in hopes someone sees my pain an in pity they press play
SUBSCRIBE : http://www.youtube.com/user/ResidentialNoise

the emcee is me, the host for the night
papa doc, only thing i dont choke on the mic - redman

LISTEN UP: http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=10104374
lets get this track to number 1!

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