No Thanks - Full Song!

[mcZu]

I see the changes, it's a lot better now. The verses had some beautiful phrasing through out the whole song, and I love the chorus. In terms of lyricism, it's ace. In terms of flow, depends on the beat you used, but it seems like a pretty smooth flow. If you want more in depth feed I would like to listen to the beat you used. But overall it looks like it could be a great song, if recorded. Poetic yet direct, I like it.

[Steve Spag]

Wow, what an amazing piece of work!

there's no change... it's Reserved for the Federals

I see what you did there!

Keep it up bro!

[B.A.D.]

"bash and beat the whole entire cast of Glee and laugh"


I like the song, its a bit hard to get the general point, maybe too intelligent, it seems like you cover a lot of diferent themes and topics but it could be just one in a whole methaphorical view.

I like this trype of writings that keep me guessing.

good one

[Weather Man]

Really good song, I would like to listen to this 'audio version'. But overall 10/10.