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Old School Silver 2

Postby Just Silver » Aug 20th, '10, 01:34

Im on a roll like a somersault
Get peppered with bullets and "a salt"
Man them all sink em like a cannonball
You cats real you cant even land at all
Your gonna need an expanded jaw
I cavemen them im a neanderthal
I say venom it almost hurts to call
Lifes a beach and i hate to break your ball
But this is me and i will go and take it all
Show them fire blaze the mall
And while i blaze them all
Everydays a call while im hidding in the sprawl
Call me a pit the way she dive for my balls
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Re: Old School Silver 2

Postby Just Silver » Aug 20th, '10, 16:22

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Re: Old School Silver 2

Postby Just Silver » Aug 22nd, '10, 00:21

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Re: Old School Silver 2

Postby Just Silver » Aug 22nd, '10, 00:44

SiiNiDE wrote:Why would you bump this trash? And twice? Let it die where it belongs. You're better off sticking to biting my style.

Your right :flower:
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Re: Old School Silver 2

Postby Just Silver » Aug 22nd, '10, 00:48

honestly i knew this one was shit lol

i was just trying to type regardless
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Re: Old School Silver 2

Postby Just Silver » Aug 22nd, '10, 00:51

SiiNiDE wrote:
Just Silver wrote:honestly i knew this one was shit lol

i was just trying to type regardless


I'm not saying YOU are bad. so don't take it that way, please.

Thanks i just need to actually think before i write i usually freeverse everything
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Re: Old School Silver 2

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 22nd, '10, 01:07

Damn SiiNide, get off silv's dick...hahah

Anyway, silv this definately aint bad for a rough/early piece...I mean the punches and were just unrounded corners you know and you've just about rounded out all of the corners. Couple more things and you'll be done, mostly the structure
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Re: Old School Silver 2

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 22nd, '10, 07:07

SiiNiDE wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:Damn SiiNide, get off silv's dick...hahah

Anyway, silv this definately aint bad for a rough/early piece...I mean the punches and were just unrounded corners you know and you've just about rounded out all of the corners. Couple more things and you'll be done, mostly the structure


You follow me like a lost dog. Keep studying me and you might learn how a real artist writes. Then again, judging by how fucking stupid you are, I wouldn't count on that.

Haha follow you? I'm supporting my boy Silv. He's improving unlike you're declining ass
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Re: Old School Silver 2

Postby Yah-hah » Aug 23rd, '10, 21:05

Bro Si you honestly aint head nd shoulders above all these people I dont know why you feel you gotta talk shit to everyone like you're any fuckin good. You have some good concepts but your not exatcly amazing. Yet you wanna come around and act like Fa-Q andcats are terrible. I'm pretty sure most people would choose him over you. You sit here and act like you've got the dopest writtens and then say no one here is doin their thing cuz you're "rockin shows" then go and do that bullshit and get the fuck out of here talkin unecessary, unbacked bullshit :y:
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Old School Silver 2

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 24th, '10, 03:47

Hahah SiiNide, you can't judge my pieces if you don't read them. I change my rhyming scheme and multies every single piece I do. I take pride in it. Me, on the other hand, has read your pieces. I've looked between the lines and I know anybody on here is better than you. So I don't do audio? So what? Aint no one ever been on your dick about. Aint no one respect you. Me and Yah joke about your sorry ass.
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Re: Old School Silver 2

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 24th, '10, 04:15

SiiNiDE wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:Hahah SiiNide, you can't judge my pieces if you don't read them. I change my rhyming scheme and multies every single piece I do. I take pride in it. Me, on the other hand, has read your pieces. I've looked between the lines and I know anybody on here is better than you. So I don't do audio? So what? Aint no one ever been on your dick about. Aint no one respect you. Me and Yah joke about your sorry ass.

sounds like jealousy to me. If you read my pieces that means you read the comments and know that I am, in fact, respected by numerous vets. Therefore your ridiculous claim becomes nullified. Thanks for tasting my scrotum though. By the way,i was writing the shir you write back in 2006.yup that's how bad you are. Kindly die in a fire.

Name the vets...by the way you got no votes in the tourney
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Re: Old School Silver 2

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 24th, '10, 04:34

Im at colleg and I dont have time to record...I have to make money instead of being stuck working a Wendy's all my life like Im assuming you do
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Re: Old School Silver 2

Postby Drama Setter » Aug 24th, '10, 11:14

there were cool ass lines up there , keep it up
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Re: Old School Silver 2

Postby Yah-hah » Aug 24th, '10, 16:42

Wow how the fuck you think I was givin you any props Si? I honestly think you talk yourself like your dope and you DEFINITLY dont deliver like you say you do. Your "style" is different from Fa-Qs or alot of other people so how the fuck are you gonna judge anyone. All you do is talk yourself up like a bitch. Your style is simple and your schemes are fuckin basic. You been rhymin since 06' but you're still garbage. Idk why the fuck you're even arguing with Fa-Q in the first place. You're no where near the best MC on here. And tp all the vets that you claim have your back should bitch slap you for sayin you were the only person on here rockin shows. Then Big came and said some shit and you tucked your tail inbetween your legs re started actin like an even littler bitch. There are plenty of people way better than you. In audio you get stomped by so many people, so you gotta come into text and try to say you're the dopest cuz you do audio??? Come on
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Old School Silver 2

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 24th, '10, 20:43

Isnt it funny when people have one response. That "You Mad" line...that shits played out. no one likes you...so you should just leave SiiNide :wave: and heres Yah saying goodbye :wave:
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