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Re: 2 Random Verses

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 20th, '10, 20:16

Pretty good lyrics but I can't help but feel it's too "McMaybeish". The flow was great on both pieces and your choice of words was superb. Overall, I enjoyed both verses and I think they're great for what they are.

Keep it up man!
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Re: 2 Random Verses

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 20th, '10, 20:29

Clarky wrote:
Steve Spag wrote:Pretty good lyrics but I can't help but feel it's too "McMaybeish". The flow was great on both pieces and your choice of words was superb. Overall, I enjoyed both verses and I think they're great for what they are.

Keep it up man!
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I've not really heard anything of MCMaybe's that I can remember mate so I'm not tryna copy anybodys style or anything.

Appreciate the good feedback though, cheers! :y:

No worries man. And it's more of a compliment than anything because he's like God when it comes to music, lol. Keep it up man.
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Re: 2 Random Verses

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 20th, '10, 20:36

^^
Well his stuff isn't really on the net much anymore because it's all old and he's working on a bunch of new amazing stuff. I don't have any links but I know someone not too long ago uploaded a file with over 50 of his songs.
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Re: 2 Random Verses

Postby Weather Man » Aug 25th, '10, 06:29

Really nice flow, kinda reminds me of a too short song, where he just rhymes constantly you got good rhymes, seems like it could be a good story telling song too. anyways nice work ..props :smoking:
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