Geno - Shadows (Mart's beat, props to him)
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Re: Geno - Shadows (Mart's beat, props to him)
by Atone » Aug 22nd, '10, 08:45
that shits pretty tight man, you should record it
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Re: Geno - Shadows (Mart's beat, props to him)
by Emadyville » Aug 22nd, '10, 08:46
excellent story telling on this man 
it was well done, I liked how you structured the verses, the description in it was great, i would love to hear this shit
it was well done, I liked how you structured the verses, the description in it was great, i would love to hear this shit
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Re: Geno - Shadows (Mart's beat, props to him)
by mart85 » Aug 22nd, '10, 14:35
Emadyville wrote:excellent story telling on this man
it was well done, I liked how you structured the verses, the description in it was great, i would love to hear this shit
yup
I'm really not good at giving feedback on lyrics, but it sounded real nice, nice storytelling - mart85
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Re: Geno - Shadows (Mart's beat, props to him)
by mcZu » Aug 22nd, '10, 23:14
This is good. You're improving. Some rhymes sounded a lil' bit generic, however that doesn't take away the emotion that's behind them. Good job, Geno. Keep this up, pause.
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