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Postby Tash8 » Aug 25th, '10, 07:47

I'm moving on, leaving home
ridin on my own,
away from the life that i have known, I'm alone
stoned
cold as snow I ain't frozen just yet (no)
there's plenty more to go
I know, how I feel will subside or will heal,
So I've been in worse, but you see i'm still here
I left my best friends behind
alone selfisly cause I'm doing what I want, I think's best for me
no one babysitting me always staying next to me
these bags of bud
have got me acting up
there's no one there to back me up
but I'm man enough to can em up and send em of to canada
even when i'm damanged up, and it's best you fasten up,
cause i'm driving crazy on this ride, fists high, this's why
I'm lit high, when I, spits rhymes
I'll trip minds, why wouldn't I?
it's time to close another chapter
I havta for now and ever after
moments owned with laughter, I crafta
brilliant strickened rhyme
that will catchya
faster than the rapture
when jesus comes to grab ya
I recaptured the spark,
mastered the art
took these bastards and ripped they asses apart
I can change your ways
like mona lisas eyes won't you see how I'll make you disapear like a bullet from my gunclip (oh my)
they talk a lot of shit but can't hold they own weight like they anorexic
accept it,
so quit trying to impress bitch get undressed quick,
like a bong with good weed, you can be my best hit
to get it
cold and alone, no home on my own
sleeping on the floor
but shiiit, it ain't never stopping me if I recall
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Re: Verse

Postby Weather Man » Aug 25th, '10, 08:00

Dam, that was pretty good, nice rhymes there, flowed nice really enjoyed some lines, you got talent, nicely done on my part :b:
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Re: Verse

Postby Tash8 » Aug 25th, '10, 08:14

Captain wrote:Dam, that was pretty good, nice rhymes there, flowed nice really enjoyed some lines, you got talent, nicely done on my part :b:


thx bro
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Re: Verse

Postby Tash8 » Aug 25th, '10, 23:33

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