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Breathe Of Fresh Air

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Breathe Of Fresh Air

Postby Tash8 » Aug 31st, '10, 03:56

I got the good life that all yall would like
I'm on a bright ride so I paint the hood white
I'm sleeping on all these fools so i guess it's good night
ain't playin no more good guy , so goodbye
I'm bringing cali back can he rap?
can peyton manning pass? or Kobe smash?
muhafucka It's The Game making rapper's handicapped
i'm a treat for ya'll hear so I guess I'm candywrap (candy rap)
I was born on halloween so I'm always candy packed
trick or get slapped hoe, for pullin any crap
I'll flow while I blow ohs at the same time
spit slick shit all within the same rhyme,
It's DRE day
with this A-grade green
CA Raised weed
looking soo dank it'd could be a painting
I'm type of the guy who'd untie loose ends
I see a bunch of dead people it's a nusiance (new sense)
I use it for amusement, 'cuse me misss
would you do stay?
I got the grey goose flow that will make you looseen
feeling cool like Lu-Pe, but i'll blow like butane right
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Re: Breathe Of Fresh Air

Postby Emadyville » Aug 31st, '10, 04:03

sick like usual :y:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Breathe Of Fresh Air

Postby Yah-hah » Aug 31st, '10, 21:32

Sorry if I'm hearin the flow wrong been listenin to Gift of Gab lately so everything sounds like a chill flow, I can kinda bob my head to this lly cool. The short lines make it flow really well, Overall man was good I enjoyed it
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Breathe Of Fresh Air

Postby Emadyville » Sep 1st, '10, 02:21

Yah-hah wrote:Sorry if I'm hearin the flow wrong been listenin to Gift of Gab lately so everything sounds like a chill flow, I can kinda bob my head to this lly cool. The short lines make it flow really well, Overall man was good I enjoyed it


wait till he finished recording it, I heard some today, fuckin dirty :y:
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Re: Breathe Of Fresh Air

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 1st, '10, 02:24

Yo Tash PM me when you get that shit :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Breathe Of Fresh Air

Postby theJFKshow » Sep 1st, '10, 04:58

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Re: Breathe Of Fresh Air

Postby mcZu » Sep 2nd, '10, 13:58

Not bad, depends on how this comes of as an actuall recording. I'll be sure to check it out when recorded, seems promising.
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