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Who's Smart? (? Diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 2nd, '10, 01:35

the only dome splitter known to flow
over the illest tones wit vocal rhythm sickness shown
to be doper than what clinics clone
my cell instilled wisdoms grown through sentintel fillin probes
now im outta the matrix,
faceless wit multi-image strobes causin epiliptic seizures,
jawin every sect and region wit heat
my chest been breathin exceedin temps of mesophilia
strike em quick, assassins credence
i find the peek and supercede it my worst still masters
best believe it
no verse fashioned gets repeated
my concept titles spread from here
to distances where Barcelonians translate life for future heads
meanwhile your bars sell only in circles where ice is flashed
yet ya ass far from ownin it falsely flauntin rental jewels,
my lyric gems are hard to pose against spittin simple simile puns
the ammo for my enemys guns is ample
when huntin withering gummed crippling cats
with amphibian tongues
flismy prey is frayed wit methods seen in bicentennial runs
as mass amounts of traumas accounts spread vira
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Re: Who's Smart? (? Diss)

Postby classthe_king » Sep 2nd, '10, 01:59

Wtf is this
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Who's Smart? (? Diss)

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 2nd, '10, 02:40

who you dissin?
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Who's Smart? (? Diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 2nd, '10, 03:06

may not be a good diss but....who uses "big" words?
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Re: Who's Smart? (? Diss)

Postby classthe_king » Sep 2nd, '10, 03:18

bullet_boy46 wrote:may not be a good diss but....who uses "big" words?


So you're dissing Mc Anonymous? He's not even on the forum anymore :facepalm
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Who's Smart? (? Diss)

Postby Solace » Sep 2nd, '10, 03:19

Not you again.
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Re: Who's Smart? (? Diss)

Postby Just Silver » Sep 2nd, '10, 03:35

Canibus?
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Re: Who's Smart? (? Diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 2nd, '10, 03:45

classthe_king wrote:
bullet_boy46 wrote:may not be a good diss but....who uses "big" words?


So you're dissing Mc Anonymous? He's not even on the forum anymore :facepalm


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Re: Who's Smart? (? Diss)

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 2nd, '10, 05:34

Ok that kinda makes sense I guess.
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Who's Smart? (? Diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 2nd, '10, 05:48

SiiNiDE wrote:You aren't dissing me you dumb ass, lmao. You bit this. Lemme find the link. LOL



"haha" kill yo ass :coffee:
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Re: Who's Smart? (? Diss)

Postby Solace » Sep 2nd, '10, 13:30

SiiNiDE wrote:You aren't dissing me you dumb ass, lmao. You bit this. Lemme find the link. LOL

Please do so, I'm tired of finding each piece Bullet Boy's copied on my own you know?

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Re: Who's Smart? (? Diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 2nd, '10, 23:55

go ahead, cause i didnt copy shiz....
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Re: Who's Smart? (? Diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 4th, '10, 02:44

Geno wrote:Tell me about the sun, rain, moon and stars,
Intergalactical metaphors from Mars.

:y:
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Re: Who's Smart? (? Diss)

Postby WakeUpShow » Sep 5th, '10, 03:22

none of those lines even make sense.
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Re: Who's Smart? (? Diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 5th, '10, 06:49

^ lol, 1 or 2 do , it wasnt even meant to be a diss
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