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Re: Indian diss I suppose.

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 2nd, '10, 05:45

Haha I'm not Cherokee. I find it funny you give all this talk about multis and your shit had more than mine. It was cool I guess the whole Native thing ya know yeah a few punches were cool but its ALL irrelevant ya know about how you gonna merk me a million differet ways. I get it tho aint sayin I didnt do the same thing at times. But I put out rellevant shit like how you bit a different battle and shit. I mean I'll give ya props for doin some shit haha aint like I'm not an easy target. But I saw your picture and you lose......life. lol naw but seriously dude people aint bout to respect someone that says a bunch of shit and doesnt back any of it. Xray and Anon had better :coffee:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Indian diss I suppose.

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 2nd, '10, 05:47

Its like if a little kid wrote it?
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Re: Indian diss I suppose.

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 2nd, '10, 05:50

Sexy............................sure mastered hip-hop..........definitly. You look like a sad puppy :flower:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Indian diss I suppose.

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 2nd, '10, 05:52

Ha all I'm sayin is Exposing someone as a biter and a fake > a bunch of average punches Yo big white ass aint knockin anyone
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Indian diss I suppose.

Postby J Roc » Sep 2nd, '10, 05:53

I think TR Wants a Round 2 ....... remember to judge fairly and not hate or dickryder, people .....
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Re: Indian diss I suppose.

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 2nd, '10, 06:06

SiiNiDE wrote:OK I'll be far and break my explanation of it down

The best at what you do???....
I ignore claims from poor lames that clean up after me,
ravage and beat this savage geek til his mind is "Boggled" like milton bradley and board games LAME
You SORE LAME! Sii tragically scorch flames
and make claims over the great plains til there's "no reservations" without Anthony Bourdaine! I ACTUALLY THOUGHT THIS ONE WAS GOOD
Throw you on the pavement, fuck your engagement, your whore's lame!
"Slap shot" this bitch so hard it'll leave Wayne Gretzky crying! HAHA GETS REALLY OLD
the same text he's trying, I've alreayd mastered! so test me try It..
But you best be flying...
cos if not I'll slay this bitch with a blade THIS BIG... Yeah I'm on a "red" meat diet! ALRIGHT
flail your peers and set fire to your teepee!
you can beat me... but that would require you to BE me, your failure's clear!
A whole crew of assailants geared with nails and spears "Dragging your face across the ground" bringing a whole new definition to "Trail of tears"...!!! SORTA KINDA i GET IT YA KNOW ITS NOT TERRIBLE
You're frail and near death... Leave a spearhead embedded in your head dress
and bench press the mess left after I bomb jerks, UNEEDED MULTIS. PROLLY WOULDNT POINT I OUT IF YOU HADENT BEEN SAYIN HOW PLAYED THEY ARE
Cos if you're "Running things around here" we will "witness a Dead Prez"...
...like catching M-1 in concert! I DONT GET IT
The fastest punches on earth! I'll pop ya kid!
So trying running I'll slip with ease, grip ya feet, tighter than your moccasins! ???
Honest shit! Yah-Hah couldn't "hold down" sii with his whole tribe on top of him! NOT VERY GOOD
So fight back, I'll block it spin and drop your chin with a slight crash...
a light flash, and BOOM another "native disaster"!! DONT GET THIS ONE EITHER
You're bound to die someday I'm just making it faster..
everything you said is "lies" so Try to escape with your back turned,
I'll flash burn this "snake" in the grass, learn to take in the facts!THIS AND THE PREVIOUS LINE I DONT GET
You say what everyone else says, you STAN! Parakeet!NOT A STAN :smoking:
How is this man scaring me?? explain my speech!
You aren't "The best"! We all know the only "Grand" Cherokee was made by jeep!
ITS A NATIVE JOKE I GET IT BUT WOULD HAVE BEEN BETTER IF YA USED MY ACTUAL TRIBE, WHICH IS PRETTY EASY T DISS

ALL IN ALL WAT IM SAYING IS ITS A BUNCH OF PUNCHES ON NATIVES.I'M NOT SURE IF YOU CONSIDER THAT PERSONAL I MEAN ITS MY RACE AND ALL SO I GUESS IF IT WORKS FOR YOU. NOT GONNA COMPARE IT TO MY DISS IT WAS GOOD BUT WASNT LIKE 'OH SHIT' KINDA STUFF


In conclusion, this takes so little skill... Fuck text. And I don't do explanations so fuck off if you don't understand.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Indian diss I suppose.

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 2nd, '10, 06:07

SiiNiDE wrote:Exposing? Lol you fruit that was 4 years ago and been used in every diss against me... Right. you seem like youre trying to save face. Face it, I'm better than you even at your coveted text bull shit.


Same bitch from 4 years ago :coffee: and wat did you do better
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Indian diss I suppose.

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 2nd, '10, 06:08

yah wins....shit on sii...2 girls 1 cup.....
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Re: Indian diss I suppose.

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 2nd, '10, 06:10

bullet_boy46 wrote:yah wins....shit on sii...2 girls 1 cup.....




:laughing:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Indian diss I suppose.

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 2nd, '10, 06:12

waiting to hear "dick rider"
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Re: Indian diss I suppose.

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 2nd, '10, 06:17

Because they're lame as shit bro. They dont make any sense and aren't any good.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Indian diss I suppose.

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 2nd, '10, 06:21

You had two above average punches. The no reservations one was cool and the trail of teas one was cool. Wat else was dope
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Indian diss I suppose.

Postby AbramIsaac » Sep 2nd, '10, 19:40

Yah's shit was more personal, as opposed to a full post full of lines about how he's better, or how he'll fuck you up. His was just referencing things you've done or said in the past, without sounding like an arrogant prick.

While "textceeing" won't lead anywhere, he crafted a better diss towards you, without a doubt.
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Re: Indian diss I suppose.

Postby AbramIsaac » Sep 2nd, '10, 19:56

SiiNiDE wrote:
AbramIsaac wrote:Yah's shit was more personal, as opposed to a full post full of lines about how he's better, or how he'll fuck you up. His was just referencing things you've done or said in the past, without sounding like an arrogant prick.

While "textceeing" won't lead anywhere, he crafted a better diss towards you, without a doubt.


LOL. Where were his punches? rhyme schemes? Wordplays that weren't over used? Decent metaphores? Exactly.

This is why you're all amateurs, lol. I feel like payton manning throwing at a highschool football game. Shit just isn't fair.

Try and follow me here.

I said his was more personal. You can go on and on about the technical merit of your diss, but the fact is that it lacked any kind of substance. Half of those lines (if not more) could have been aimed at anyone. His was more direct. It was specifically about you, and there wasn't any mistaking it. Take out the Native references, and yours could be dissing damn near anybody.

The best diss records are ones that cut the deepest--the personal ones. While you probably didn't care either way, the fact is that his pulled directly from what you have said and done. Yours was vague in comparison.

So. Either everyone is wrong, everyone is hating, and no one knows what they're talking about...or...you're too proud to admit that you're wrong. It's not like I even know you as a poster. I've barely corresponded with Yah-Hah since I've been here. I'm just giving my .02.
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Re: Indian diss I suppose.

Postby AbramIsaac » Sep 2nd, '10, 20:17

Chet Starr wrote:I love Yah, but you guys gotta be smoking crack or something

I don't know who had the better diss cause I haven't looked at Yah's yet, but I can't see how you guys can deny this is dope

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=96714

Whether or not this is dope isn't really what I'm saying. I'm just saying that Yah-Hah had a better diss.
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