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Puzzle Life

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Puzzle Life

Postby ShaBruv » Sep 3rd, '10, 13:51

i remember as a little kid, i aint had shit to fiddle wid,
'cept a box a puzzle kit, with shapes that didnt fuckin fit,
and now you see i must admit, that box is like my life a bit,
Houding round not doing shit, no relation ship i will commit,
i wonder why i dont just quit, i could end it all with just a slit,
but i wont, shit i just did, these shapes these pieces i'll get rid,
but fuck it now ive got a kid, he'll look up to me, i'll look like shit,
These shapes, i think will never fit, so why i try i dont know it
I know you want to retaliate but you won't dare,
Cause you fuckin with some ****** like this who just don't care.

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Re: Puzzle Life

Postby ShaBruv » Sep 4th, '10, 11:57

SiiNiDE wrote:'cept a box a puzzle kit, with shapes that didnt fuckin fit


Pretty sure I've heard this line in a song.


I haven't lol but I could probably see this being said slightly different maybe
I know you want to retaliate but you won't dare,
Cause you fuckin with some ****** like this who just don't care.

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