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Random Verse.

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Sep 3rd, '10, 22:30

ok i used to rap but i gave up on it.
this is my 1st verse in a year or so and it took me 2 minutes to write. :p

what am i supposed to do im dyin from this shit
im arsed to keep cryin from the words i get
mom's like get of ur ass u fuckin bitch
im tired of payin for ur god damn bandwidth
but yo guess ima keep shovin
dicks up pussies till im numb when im cummin
dont fuck wit me im tired of the jealousy
people think im happy cuz of havin a 24 hour nappy
huh?damn this is stupid and im feelin dizzy
this old fuckin weed got me little tipsy
my mind is goin up against me
guess ima go back tell some one u mad
like my dad who wanna put me in a body bag
and get rid off my ass yo turn up the fuckin bass
ima focus on the future fuck the fuckin past

feedback appreciated and ima get better again and fuck u fuckers up :tounge2:
dont be harsh on a brotha
The devil ain't on a level same as him!
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Re: Random Verse.

Postby DƎRDYPK » Sep 3rd, '10, 22:31

lol you already know what I think
keep at it
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