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New Crew on The Block (The Heavyweight Collision) Lightwork!

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New Crew on The Block (The Heavyweight Collision) Lightwork!

Postby J Roc » Sep 5th, '10, 12:53

*The Heavyweight Collision Aka THC Enters The Ring*

THE ROCK !!!! :
Hit-The-Shelves If-You-Smeeeeeeeeeellllllllllllllllllllllll .... What The ROC IS COOKIN
When DRAMA'S LOOKIN U The Type To COCK & PULL IT But ForGOT THE BULLET
Were SCHEMING-MAD EVIL-PLANS, U Can Kiss 'Roc bottem' Cuz im the PEOPLES CHAMP
Ur MOM IS INTRAPMENT Oh Wait Is That a THONG THAT SHES FLASHING?
Imma Hit-The-Roach In-a-Bowl For My BONG SATISFACTION
Face-The-End U Aint Making-'Bread' So What Goes On TOP OF THE SANDWHICH?
I bump Topics-Old That the 'Mod'll-Close' but i dont TALK ABOUT FASHION (Model Clothes)
I'd JUMP AT THE SIGHT .. Wait what have These Drugs DONE TO MY EYES?!?!
Steven-Boo must be Luigi-too Cuz When we "Eat-a-Shrooom" we DOUBLE IN SIZE
I Dont 'BUY BULL', JESUS(bible).... Juss Cuz u got Punchlines-Dont-Mean im InCLINED TO READ IT
I RHYME UNIQUE BITCH but Enough Batttle-Lines Immma Passs-The-MIC TO STEVEN

*Drops Mic

WARNING : The british are coming.... Viewer Discretion Is Advised

STEVEN WONDER !!!! :
Immune to enhancements,
Its false because truth is never in answers,
The government is holding cures to all cancers,
You necromancers trying to get under my verse,
Dance on the dirt, whilst im six feet below,
im feeling those kicks like a pregnant woman waitin to blow,
I undress in the snow, rap up in the summer,
your the least known in your crew, like heavy metal drummers,
I thrive in slums and live poor in the burbs
If you cross me like jesus, ill put your teeth on the curb,
competing with the punchline king or steven, you bitches absurd


There u have it folks thats whut happens when THE HEAVYWEIGHTS COLLIDE. and we loooking for one more member ................ Lightwork On Both Sides Of The Arena

THC is so dope.............

WhatTheFuckIsA5StarGeneral????????
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Re: New Crew on The Block (The Heavyweight Collision) Lightwork!

Postby ThomasJ » Sep 5th, '10, 16:52

SiiNiDE wrote:I would join THC,but I'm too dope for that shit...
I do shows,you hear me? SHOWS.
...The mortician of love, sent from above
Forced entry, the more wenchy, the more stingy I become
Been doing this for more than a quarter century, I'm just numb...
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Re: New Crew on The Block (The Heavyweight Collision) Lightwork!

Postby ThomasJ » Sep 5th, '10, 17:40

SiiNiDE wrote:
TJthaGreat wrote:
SiiNiDE wrote:I would join THC,but I'm too dope for that shit...
I do shows,you hear me? SHOWS.


Your latest drop looks like a justin beiber throw away. And yeah, youre right.. I am. And I do. Good looks.

Jeez,I just made a joke,no need to get all worked up :shakehead:
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Re: New Crew on The Block (The Heavyweight Collision) Lightwork!

Postby Enimee » Sep 5th, '10, 17:44

siinides a queer,

anyways back to the topic at hand

steves drop was pretty thourough i liked the flow, and jay well jay did what he usually does soo nothin new there lol
fagget

anyways good shit lookin forward to the progression of this
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Re: New Crew on The Block (The Heavyweight Collision) Lightwork!

Postby Enimee » Sep 5th, '10, 20:29

ooo thats creative, hmm were any of my drops titled "please siinide check this out its impressive", no? thenn i prolly wasnt lookin for your approval you
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Re: New Crew on The Block (The Heavyweight Collision) Lightwork!

Postby J Roc » Sep 5th, '10, 20:59

lol ............. THC!
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Re: New Crew on The Block (The Heavyweight Collision) Lightwork!

Postby Solace » Sep 5th, '10, 23:43

Stevens verse sucked..."Unknown like heavy metal drummers" lol seriously? Roccys verse was nice. :y: Seemed like random verses stuck together, no written chemistry if you get me. Cross me like Jesus was probably the only thing decent from your verse Steven tbh, keep that one in my for future so you can pull it off better. :y:
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Re: New Crew on The Block (The Heavyweight Collision) Lightwork!

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 6th, '10, 08:30

Sii still trollin :wave: Stevens verse didnt look great next to Rocs I guess. Enimee is cool as fuck :y:
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
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With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Re: New Crew on The Block (The Heavyweight Collision) Lightwork!

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 7th, '10, 21:06

:shifty: sneak my ass into a group...

anyways nice drop from alll steve coulda done betta, thats chill

keep at it :y:

PS: recommend me, lmao
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Re: New Crew on The Block (The Heavyweight Collision) Lightwork!

Postby Rain Matrix » Sep 9th, '10, 04:43

no shit, :y: ... I didn't know new kids on the block was coming back

nah but for real the religon thing was wack and lot of this could have been better
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Re: New Crew on The Block (The Heavyweight Collision) Lightwork!

Postby J Roc » Sep 10th, '10, 20:49

lol ^ ... *BOTH OUR VERSES WAS KEYSTYLE'D TO THE MAX* ..... ... Thc :staticsmoking:
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Re: New Crew on The Block (The Heavyweight Collision) Lightwork!

Postby J Roc » Sep 11th, '10, 08:30

SiiNiDE wrote:
J CrackRockz wrote:lol ^ ... *BOTH OUR VERSES WAS KEYSTYLE'D TO THE MAX* ..... ... Thc :staticsmoking:

Hey.. good job ducking, sunshine. You got ripped by someone who doesn't even text. You must have seen everyone laughing at ur pic and froze. Hahaha


Yea that must be it
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