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The Pessimist

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The Pessimist

Postby mcZu » Sep 6th, '10, 03:00

Politics mixed with mocking bliss
They’re blocking wisdom
With a shocking grip of docking this doctrine of rocking bits
That are locking this boxing fist
Of freedom in a boxed up box that is
Locked with a lock thin and carved in fog and mist
You can call this an Apocalypse
Off with the careful leash..

So stop the system of narcissism
And love yourself, no euphemism
No political correct intuitions
I be in to missions that sense insufficient
Reason in the area of senseless victims
Envision the ground of poems
With nonsense sounding omens
Dipped in plain casualties..

I’ll be casual yet unique with my tendencies
Mending beats with a sense of peace
While attending these fantasies
That I sketch in a poetical master piece
Dubbed as a master thesis with a faster feed
I fast forward and just blast the blasphemy
Of these fact less Emcees in the industry
While you cast your least..
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
- Lupe Fiasco

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Re: The Pessimist

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 6th, '10, 03:42

blast blasphemy was dope

really good :y:
Solace wrote:Oh stop your making me blush :blinking:

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Re: The Pessimist

Postby Weather Man » Sep 6th, '10, 08:08

This is good, i'd like to here it in audio version :)
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Re: The Pessimist

Postby mcZu » Sep 7th, '10, 18:22

Thank you guys.
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