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Explosive Ish

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Explosive Ish

Postby Rain Matrix » Sep 8th, '10, 05:31

a little keystyle to Lose My Mind by Young Jeezy...

I took my perception of me and Tore it Down
all becuz I thought that I had a Boring Sound
in all honesty I should have Ignored the Doubt
no harm done tho soon it'll be Pouring Out
fuck the power rangers, I'm the one Morphing Now
Stormy Clouds Form Around a Man like Me
this hurricane Slams the Beat and any Land it Meets
my sanest thoughts are border line Insanity
this is reality, snap out of your Fantasy
haters don't like me, I got um feeling Panicky
it seems that they can't Handle These, Rhymes at All
there's no excuse for it cuz my Minds at Fault
they say I'll need to grow a new Spine or Crawl
emt's are everywhere now, they can't Find a Pulse
I'm Dead ta Fakes and I'm done with Yesterday
let me be, Get Away before I Detonate
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Re: Explosive Ish

Postby Enimee » Sep 8th, '10, 06:52

sick shit as always decent, liked the consistency
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Re: Explosive Ish

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 8th, '10, 17:35

flow is good, some sick shit indeed
Solace wrote:Oh stop your making me blush :blinking:

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