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Gassed Up [Diss]

Postby Strictt Ame » Sep 10th, '10, 20:33

Look, this pro geek has no heat yet hes still a faggot and an all across flamer
Please try n die, cuz the last people feelin SiiNiDE were in a Holocaust chamber
You are not at all danger, so get back or get smacked with a molotov player
Id say your the worst forced wordplay rapper but Im sure you been called alot lamer
Hop off J Roc's dick cuz nut huggers get sliced veins and bombed ateries
Im gonna buckle this kid with knuckles n shit, duck the long arm of me
Yeh I throw punches...at yo stomach, no bluffin, no nuthin..theres no harmin me
And by the looks of it your havin a hard time gettin off the Roc like Sean Connery
Face it, theres no defeatin me punk, Jesus you suck, please leave it to us
Before I make you start bleedin n stuff, leakin your guts, puking it out, peein it up
Because your skills are like 7 days of straight sex..theyre week-er than fuck
Must be blind to game..after all you got 3 i's in your name and still cant see that you suck
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Re: Gassed Up [Diss]

Postby classthe_king » Sep 10th, '10, 20:37

What was the motive behind this
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Gassed Up [Diss]

Postby Strictt Ame » Sep 10th, '10, 20:40

Boredom..plus I saw a guy with forced ass metas and wordplay acting like hes great..so the combination ended up as a diss to that person..lol
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Re: Gassed Up [Diss]

Postby mcZu » Sep 10th, '10, 20:46

Strictt Ame wrote:Because your skills are like 7 days of straight sex..theyre week-er than fuck


''Because your skills are like 7 days of straight sex.. they're weak as fuck.'' Would be better. Besides that it's a dope lil' verse.

This dissing is getting played out though.
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Re: Gassed Up [Diss]

Postby Strictt Ame » Sep 10th, '10, 20:50

mcZu wrote:
Strictt Ame wrote:Because your skills are like 7 days of straight sex..theyre week-er than fuck


''Because your skills are like 7 days of straight sex.. they're weak as fuck.'' Would be better. Besides that it's a dope lil' verse.

This dissing is getting played out though.

weak as fuck is only 3 syllables, I had a 4 syllable rhyme scheme..trust me, already thought of that
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Re: Gassed Up [Diss]

Postby ThomasJ » Sep 10th, '10, 20:56

mcZu wrote:
Strictt Ame wrote:Because your skills are like 7 days of straight sex..theyre week-er than fuck


''Because your skills are like 7 days of straight sex.. they're weak as fuck.'' Would be better. Besides that it's a dope lil' verse.

This dissing is getting played out though.

Canibus wrote:Niggas be tryin' to test, but they 'week' like seven days

Dope diss tho. :y:
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Re: Gassed Up [Diss]

Postby mcZu » Sep 10th, '10, 20:59

^Bis wasn't the first to use that concept.. Plus Strict's was different. A lot of rappers have actually used that concept.
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Re: Gassed Up [Diss]

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 10th, '10, 21:07

:D :worship: Thank you aim....shut this kid down....where you been by the way?
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Re: Gassed Up [Diss]

Postby Strictt Ame » Sep 10th, '10, 21:10

Been on a hiatus..just recently got inspired to start writing again
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Re: Gassed Up [Diss]

Postby J Roc » Sep 10th, '10, 22:19

Strictt Ame wrote:Boredom..plus I saw a guy with forced ass metas and wordplay acting like hes great..so the combination ended up as a diss to that person..lol


Thats whut i said lmao

sentiments/sediments ....?? ... lmao No Excuse Necessary... Nice Drop Tho Aim
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Re: Gassed Up [Diss]

Postby Strictt Ame » Sep 11th, '10, 15:23

son, Ive heard your audio..its nothin to brag about..and trust me, once I get a new pre-amp I'll gladly embarrass you on the mic..this site, any site you want..
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Re: Gassed Up [Diss]

Postby classthe_king » Sep 11th, '10, 16:52

You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Gassed Up [Diss]

Postby BILI » Sep 11th, '10, 20:13

[email protected] is like waaaaaaay better then you,stright talk,I`m not saying this cause I dont like your troll bullshit but cause this dude is actually dope
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Re: Gassed Up [Diss]

Postby Rain Matrix » Sep 11th, '10, 21:26

SiiNiDE wrote:
Strictt Ame wrote:son, Ive heard your audio..its nothin to brag about..and trust me, once I get a new pre-amp I'll gladly embarrass you on the mic..this site, any site you want..

Oh look we've got marky mark and the floppy cock crew. New pre amp? Lol. There's always an excuse. You're a text head, don't play like you're nice on the mice, sunshine. Don't make daddy take his belt off.

Judging by what u wrote here, I'd more than put an end to anything you tried to do.


And lol@ it becoming the new trend to diss the best. Atleast make it good. I'm glad you spend time thinking about me though.. I feel special.


it's all fun and games untill DADDY TAKES HIS BELT OFF! :laughing:
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Re: Gassed Up [Diss]

Postby J Roc » Sep 11th, '10, 22:38

Why do u always call people "sunshine" when ur arguing with people? .... i let it slide the first few times cuz i asssumed u was talking shit but constantly doing it is pretty homo .... Im drunk but fuck ittt it's the truth , Sunshine.... No homo
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