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My Verse For Sii,

Postby J Roc » Sep 14th, '10, 01:16

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Siinide Aka Poseidon bragggin wrote:by the way I have a show coming up



Imma PICK AT HIS BIRD-BRAIN, Cuz He's Bragging Bout how he SPITS ON THE WORST STAGE
Crowds MIGHT-Gather But Whoever Says "Sii's-Matters" Wasn't 'BIG' IN THE FIRST PLACE !!!
i SPIT THE HOTTEST NOUNS n Got 'Dirt' on u So Thats The only THING THATS 'COMMON GROUND'
Whoever BUILT HIS HOME 'KILLED THIS TROLL' When London 'BRIDGE' WAS FALLING DOWN!!!!
Ur Weight? u Aint PULLIN IT.. This FAT BOY made a 'BAD CHOICE' When u 'TOOK UR PIC(K)'
But For the POKER CHIPS? These BULLET CLIPS will leave 'Sii low' Cuz He's FULL OF SHIT
Named Urself Ater a MYTHICAL OMEN Send-u to 'neptune' to be the real KING OF THE OCEAN
ur SCARED OF MY STYLE It Left This 'AMERICAN IDLE' So u Can 'SING' FOR THE MOMENT
ROC'S INSANE DROPPIN RAGE Ur praly Like 'fuck Halloween' getting a Custom Sized COSTUME MADE
His pic? at FIRST IM BLINDED i know he 'DIRTY MINDED' Cuz Ur Hair Hasen't Been WASHED IN DAYS
Ur FILLED WITH GARBAGE u Could See CHILDREN STARVING without SHARING UR PLATE
This KID IS OBESE u Could 'GET A WHOLE TEAM' And Still Wouldn't 'CARRY UR WEIGHT'

2line .... Size Matters
4 Line .. Trollls live under a bridge. Duhhh
6 Line .. silo



lol Got so slack with it. Not Even Interested In ur Verse... borrrringgg. i dont care if i lose either im just glad ur over with. Dotn ever fuckin talk to me again u annoying prick.
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Re: My Verse For Sii,

Postby classthe_king » Sep 14th, '10, 01:29

The first bar was awesome but nothing after that really impressed me.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: My Verse For Sii,

Postby BILI » Sep 14th, '10, 01:45

Is that him in that pic?
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Re: My Verse For Sii,

Postby Strictt Ame » Sep 14th, '10, 16:31

Sii low line had so much potential..I think you really couldve focused a bit more on that line..but nice verse overall
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Re: My Verse For Sii,

Postby Enimee » Sep 14th, '10, 21:19

lol @ this good drop roc
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Re: My Verse For Sii,

Postby J Roc » Sep 14th, '10, 23:08

SiiNiDE wrote:
classthe_king wrote:The first bar was awesome but nothing after that really impressed me.



Any variation of a sii/size etc, wordplay, is beyond played on my name.

at any rate..

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C'mon now, mr. gangster.


No more replys from me champ. Enjoy doin ur shows. peacee
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Re: My Verse For Sii,

Postby dR3 » Sep 14th, '10, 23:58

J to the R-O-C wrote:Image

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This is the guy dissing almost everyone on TR?

:laughing: :laughing: :laughing: I literally ROFL'd.
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Re: My Verse For Sii,

Postby dR3 » Sep 15th, '10, 00:09

:laughing: :laughing: :laughing:
I don't see a difference.





Oh, and thanks for taking a pic of yourself just for me. :flutter:
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Re: My Verse For Sii,

Postby J Roc » Sep 15th, '10, 02:08

Word ^ he must think he looks stunning posting that picture 4 times in a row... no other good pics or wha
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Re: My Verse For Sii,

Postby J Roc » Sep 15th, '10, 02:09

oh and i half assed that verse cuz ur complete trash. Forced Wordplays Dont Cut It CHamp.
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Re: My Verse For Sii,

Postby Enimee » Sep 15th, '10, 04:46

wow i mean i new siinide was a fag, but wholy shit bro your concieted to? your not sexy, cause any dude who has to call them selves sexy is a loser and automatically becomes the oppisite, FACT

waht a weirdo
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Re: My Verse For Sii,

Postby Rain Matrix » Sep 15th, '10, 15:28

^ not true in fact in most cases a man who is confident enough to say he is sexy is... women melt around si cuz he has game and lot of it... which is why I'm assuming your sticking to these text diss verses :laughing:

diss was okay but your slapboxing air
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Re: My Verse For Sii,

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 15th, '10, 21:38

First line was dope tho the rest was sorta avereage Roc shit. I left for a few days tis shit still goin on :confusion:
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Re: My Verse For Sii,

Postby J Roc » Sep 16th, '10, 03:35

SiiNiDE wrote:
J to the R-O-C wrote:oh and i half assed that verse cuz ur complete trash. Forced Wordplays Dont Cut It CHamp.

Are you really making excuses for getting koed by someone who doesn't even text?? LOL. When ur balls finally drop maybe you can pick up a mic and stop the excuses, sally.

oh, and I'm sexy as hell. But I ain't gotta brag about that. If steal your girl in a minute. Hahaha.


Better get that "skrillin" mr 15 yr old canadian gangster. Bahaha.


dont worry i willl

when u finallly find ur balls maybe u can pick up a mic and not break a sweat cheif
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Re: My Verse For Sii,

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 16th, '10, 15:48

Sii, you're the only one that thinks you knocked out Roc. You're like Betty White saying she KO'd Tyson, he bit both your ears off. I'm assuming that's why you can't hear no one say you got Ether'd, bra.
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