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Soldiers (Runaway Tonight) On LTWYL Instrumental

Postby Jay-Hova » Sep 15th, '10, 04:54

Written to Love The Way You Lie Intrumental :y: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=srg1UcagsVA

[Verse 1]
Sometimes I feel like giving it up and quitting,
Cause I wonder if life is actually worth living,
Can't stand this anymore but it does hurt sitting,
I do believe my only task on earth's spitting,
Weekday at six A.M and I got a chance to dash,
Away instead of living with just plans to rap,
Maybe dropping out's a big, big, mistake
But being school gets me sick, sick with hate,
If I could in some way, just predict my fate,
I wouldn't, I'd much rather sit, pissed and wait,
And I can sense a bad, weird feeling,
That my fate contains drastic tear spilling,
It's either that or success in my only dream,
I mean a rap career don't want no other thing,
But I'm hellbound if I'm not in hell now,
Doesn't matter I won't try to get out, fuck it,

[Chorus]
I'm gonna always wanna runaway,
'Til my heart turns frozen cold,
Try and stop me cause I don't care,
I'll say yes and you'll say no,
And it's fine,
It's alright,
Cause I'm a... runaway tonight,

The time has come to runaway tonightx3
Runaway Tonight...

[Verse 2]
I might sound like just another naive teenager,
I might, don't bitch about it, come back and preach later,
I'm just venting while I feel down and depressed,
We have problems too, we're clowns in distress,
People always take the hormone scapegoat,
Fuck my daughter's sadness she just got raped though,
So cause I ain't a grown up my issues mean nothing,
My dream's fuck it, while ya basterds mean fucking,
Yeah, forget him he's an underaged bitchy brat,
He'll scratch himself calm where ever he's itchy at,
Okay, look in my eyes and tell me that I'm happy,
I rather have Soulja Boy and Gucci come out rap me,
Though it might just seem I have a low self-esteem,
I'm as confident as the next guy wearing bling-bling,
Maybe I bitch too much I mean we all go through this,
If it is then please come and soode this bitch,

[Chorus]
I'm gonna always wanna runaway,
'Til my heart turns frozen cold,
Try and stop me cause I don't care,
I'll say yes and you'll say no,
And it's fine,
It's alright,
Cause I'm a... runaway tonight,

The time has come to runaway tonightx3
Runaway Tonight...

[Verse 3]
I wanna run away from all this crap, this rap,
Is in fact jacked up, backed up by the bad, very sad,
Intact dim-black fact, that it's hard to get away,
Dark as it is never ask god to dead ya day,
It's irreversable if you get what ya wish for,
If it's done that's it we don't get to live more,
I just realized that even though pain is lurking,
And my brain is hurting we can only blame this person,
This certain dude called us, yourself, me and I,
We have an F-ten tornado fuck it we can fly,
God gave us this body so we can't get a shotty,
And put an end to it, you can't crash the party,
I'm past being naughty, and nasty to my life,
But, just know if you end it you got to pay a price,
So why am I being this inspirational all of a sudden
Because I'm sick and tired of seeing teens,
Suicidal, depressed, deceased, hanged up, brainless, bloodied and wrist cutting!!!

[Chorus]
Know that in this life, those who are feeble die,
We know it isn't right, but we must live the strife,
We have to leave as soldiers,
With soul tough as boulders,
Keeping 'em head and shoulders,
In the sky like the lord told us,
Now, we have to, runaway tonight,

Runaway from all that is wrong, runaway from bullshit and stay strong,
Stand up for what we gotta stand up for, Runaway Tonight...

Hope you like it! Please feed :D
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Re: Soldiers (Runaway Tonight) On LTWYL Instrumental

Postby Jay-Hova » Sep 15th, '10, 22:32

Nothing? :sweating:
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Re: Soldiers (Runaway Tonight) On LTWYL Instrumental

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 15th, '10, 22:41

I liked it. It's simple and has that good flow with shorter lines. It has good emotion ya know like a real cool down to earth vibe. You didnt try to make somethingreal complex and focused on writing good lyrics. great stuff man
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Soldiers (Runaway Tonight) On LTWYL Instrumental

Postby Jay-Hova » Sep 15th, '10, 22:48

Yah-hah wrote:I liked it. It's simple and has that good flow with shorter lines. It has good emotion ya know like a real cool down to earth vibe. You didnt try to make somethingreal complex and focused on writing good lyrics. great stuff man

Thank you. And that was exactly what I was going for :worship:
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Re: Soldiers (Runaway Tonight) On LTWYL Instrumental

Postby Jay-Hova » Sep 16th, '10, 19:00

Bump :(
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Re: Soldiers (Runaway Tonight) On LTWYL Instrumental

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 16th, '10, 19:05

Yeah man it's pretty rough when you're first tryin to get your name out on this site. I remember when I first came here, I wrote maybe 4 or 5 complete dope songs before people started to really notice and leave feed. Try just to check other people's drops and leave them feed so people will be like oh ok yeah that dude feed my shit he's cool I'll check his out. Or you can leave em feed and ask them to feed your latest peice. Try leaving the thread so it's easier to find. Like this :D
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=97766 So if you can see my shit and let me know wat ya think I'd appreciate it. I'll be on the lookout for ya :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Soldiers (Runaway Tonight) On LTWYL Instrumental

Postby Jay-Hova » Sep 20th, '10, 03:17

This is the last time I bump this muh'fucka :facepalm
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Re: Soldiers (Runaway Tonight) On LTWYL Instrumental

Postby Jay-Hova » Sep 20th, '10, 22:22

Yeah, I had problems with the flow at first because of it. But, I decided to keep it. Anyways thanks for the feed and when I re-write this to record this soon enough, I'll take all this feed in to make this a better song :y:

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