When nothing but lies are told

[Yah-hah]

Tell me lies though I know you don't believe I could be so naive,
Cause fake smiles take awhile for my soul to concieve,
Tell me lies as if this dreamcatcher works,
And as I sleep in the dirt I won't dream of the worst,
That these beads and feathers somehow see the weather,
Like when I open my eyes I can see it better and we can be together,
I just want it to be easy cause never have I wrote such a greedy letter,
And when I put on these cleats (NEVER) my spine will only seem severed,
I can't live afraid if I played it everything below the neck would be permanetly sedated,
They say ignorance is bliss but bliss is overated,
So I guess you could say it I stay ignorant willingly,
But it really seems these silly dreams that are filling me are killing me,
"I have the most beautiful girl in my arms so I don't need to dream",
I wrote those words without much worth it seems,
And now my passion seems trapped between her flashy wings and my daddy's screams,
So past to me this gasoline so at last you'll see,
That you have to burn the packaging to truly see the black of me,
Craftfully you run your fingers across whip marks on the back of me,
Now you scream when you see the demons screaming after me,
Laughingly I cut 100 slits into my uncut wrists,
Somewhat convinced all I ever do is somewhat exist.

When nothing but lies are told who do I believe,
Why should I believe an angel who I can't see,
I'm holding my hands close to protect them from the guardians who're harming them,
In the crosshairs of army men till my better half's gone like Harvey Dent

I mean really how much worse could it get,
When without football I feel like just a worthless kid,
All those days of lifting weights look how they worked for him,
The stars seem so far and God it hurts to miss,
My fingertips grow thicker your just a picture in my mind,
The only scripture I can find is a beginner in her time,
Just a flicker in her shine like the fissure in her spine,
No wait thats mine as I enter the center of time,
The inner winters frozen quicker broken splinter in the mud,
The sinners enter chokin with broken open liquor in my blood,
Armed with the ocean when I'm floatin on the sun,
Showin on the drum what is spoken on my tongue,
I speak the fire stop like sniper shots causing assassinations,
Words cease when JFK speaks blasting back a nation,
I'm weed wacking through streets packed with fabrications,
Exagurations like these abra cadabra magic stations,
I complete the sun's heat with only half the saturation,
I was born to kill a hundred men but I lack half the patience,

When nothing but lies are told who do I believe,
Why should I believe an angel who I can't see,
I'm holding my hands close to protect them from the guardians who're harming them,
In the crosshairs of army men till my better half's gone like Harvey Dent

My past only seems erasable,
I deem myself incapable to escape the unescapable,
Every line I write I seem unable to finish,
This cradle's diminished I'm a man yet I quit it just as soon as I finish,
The sunlight seems too bright for my hollow eyes,
I won't finish today until tomorrow arrives,
I pump weights all day yet I never feel strong,
Start feelin like the Devil I've lived in hell for so long,
I can't hide even with my head up under the covers,
Want to rise out the ash but they keep pullin me under,
How long until I'm consumed I wonder,
But for now fear my words as the boom like thunder,
Wish it were so simple if only it were easy,
Been held under water till I'm no longer breathing,
Want to burn all my words but I'm out of lighter fluid,
My letters don't seem to matter amongst all of the confusion,
How could I be so stupid drench this page in gasoline,
This burnt match hurts so bad now that I'm trapped between,
Crumple everything I've written then toss it aside,
Bitten by these words until I'm eaten alive,
I keep peeking inside just needing to find a reason to hide,
God gave me no wings so I seem no reason to fly

When nothing but lies are told who do I believe,
Why should I believe an angel who I can't see,
I'm holding my hands close to protect them from the guardians who're harming them,
In the crosshairs of army men till my better half's gone like Harvey Dent

[Fa-Q]

Liked it, Jus, except for the chorus...that Harvey Dent line should be used in a verse as a meta you know....but good shit

[Strictt Ame]

Damn bro..Im only thru the first verse but this shit is killer..I agree with FaQ about the harvey dent line..but still a decent hook..I cant even finish this right now Im leaned back..Ill get at the 2nd and 3rd verses tomorrow..Im still lovin the way you ended the 1st verse though..

def one of my fav pieces from you..

[Yah-hah]

Thanks, yeah I kinda keyed the chorus up and thats just wat came out lol. Appreciate the feed

[Emadyville]

Holy shit. first of all, ive always loved your work, you rhyme insanely and always have deep meaning.

this was on another level tho. I could flow with most of it, first verse was amazing, second was amazing, and third was amazing.

I loved the "they say ignorance is bliss but bliss is overrated" line a lot.

I love how you used abbra cadabra, and some rhymes with finish like I did in my song haha good thing I didn't read this first or I'd of felt like an asshole posting mine

This was amazing tho, the words you use to rhyme remind me of myself, which is amazing cause I'm dope as fuck...haha you know what I mean. great shit, you write this to a beat?

[Yah-hah]

Yeah I've alway thought rhyme-wise its similar to yours. you dont post often tho lol Alot of times I will write a whole song based off of a few lines. That ignorance is bliss line and god gave me no wings so I see no reason to fly line. I basically just sit for a minute or two and try to get all my emotion in control and then I'll just throw watever is in my head and find a spot with the lines I already wrote in my phone at some random point in my day. To be honest I have written to a beat like 3 or 4 times. I normally dont just because I like silence when I'm writing for the most part. I get distracted pretty easily haha

[Fa-Q]

I think its pretty funny that you're trying to do the same shit I've always done, that you would try to bash. Heh. Hypocrite.

Do you swallow without being asked, or do you have to be asked first?

[Fa-Q]

Haha, my black coated name haunts you at night, doesn't it?

[Fa-Q]

Haha, my black coated name haunts you at night, doesn't it?

Why would I care about the color of your name? It has nothing to do with ur skill level. You're terrible. And considering how random that remark was, I'm going to assume youre reaching for an argument. Too bad u suck at anything to do with this craft.

It wasnt random, it means I was top three in a vote of who was best on this site for CW...I believe you werent even on the list. It does reflect my skill level and what people think of me. Plus, I saw your piece "Horror" or whatever....you couldnt see flow if you were a wolf looking in a mirror

[Fa-Q]

That's what all votes are, popularity contests. I have skill, its recognizable. Yo have no skill, thus your popularity is completely miniscule and you didn't even receive Nadar votes.

Oh and slurred syllables is not flow in anyones book

[Yah-hah]

Wow Sii you obviosly havent seen anything from me besides the shit I've posted in like a month. I write with emotion in almost every song. Ha I write some just bs songs evry now and then to get out of a block

[Kez]

Damn Siinide you mad as hell

[Yah-hah]

Kid is always mad about somethin

[Jay-Hova]

Was a great piece with even better emotion. And personally my favorite kinda piece ARE emotional ones so of course I would love one like this.

I pump weights all day yet I never feel strong,
Start feelin like the Devil I've lived in hell for so long,

^ That bar was fucking dope.

I like it a lot. You seem like one of the best writers of these site that I've seen

[Yah-hah]

Appreciate it Jay