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Postby Tash8 » Sep 18th, '10, 12:12

Woke Up,
anotha day
I'm pumped off a blunt
and i'm on mah way
you think talks cheap
but really no it ain't when you start ta talk shit homie costs inflate
my words don't bite
but my fist might I keep tires on tracks while you fucks skid by
I waited to explode but it's time to ignite spittin raw in the booth now I got a sick mic
bracelet on my wrist I know yall hate it
It's the bay pride, Oakland Raida Nation
we'll be back muhafuckas have patience
now it's been seven years since I been shedding tear
its beeen dreadful but the era end is near
silver n black I ain't never gone back die hard like bruce willis
i've done that
it's lyrical rape
roethlisberger rap inject lines in your bloodstream
fuck your cardiac
fuck your lawsuits too
cause your like eminem
you're alway missing proof
no I can't cook
but i always dish truth
I'd be "lion" if i said I wasn't "king" in the booth
my words break ya neck like a guelllotine take you by surprise like your birthday when your sixteen
going for the gusto if you must know, i'm a sick listening
no more ass kissin,
i'm far past that
nuclear flow you better call hazmat make you see things dream things, have you breathing like an asthma attack
a neighborhood kid, stayin loyal no exception
cause my homies right now,
are my homies till we destined for death
who wanna step next
you finnna get kicked ending up in a pit, ripped slit like a bitch'

it is what is you know?

welcome to the life
all we do smoke weed drink naty ice

i'm outta class by six,
looking for a fix
weed up, sip drinks then we dip to get chicks
we the type of the guys who'd untie loose ends
I see a bunch of dead people it's a nuisance (new sense)
I use it for amusement, cuse me miss
would you do stay?
I got the grey goose flow that will make you lose aim
feeling cool like Lu-Pe, but i'll blow like butannne (explosion)
sporadic with my flow
an addict with my dro
and I'm back at it for more
bringing static thru the door, of corse
I'm the wayne of rap, call me gretzky Let's see
on the field,
I'm Messi
test me,
i'l spaz on the beat,
spit raps, get back for I slap tic tac out your muhafuckin teeth
muhafucka I'm a beast even when i'm passed out, I'll lash out in deep sleep
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Re: I Got Herpes

Postby Tash8 » Sep 18th, '10, 19:29

bump
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Re: I Got Herpes

Postby Tash8 » Sep 19th, '10, 22:57

Tash8 wrote:bump
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Re: finnnee

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 20th, '10, 05:18

weird structure :confusion:
but flows pretti good, I'd like to listen to the recorded version version of this :y:
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Re: finnnee

Postby Tash8 » Oct 3rd, '10, 01:45

posting the audio version real soon.
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Re: finnnee

Postby B.A.D. » Oct 3rd, '10, 09:31

Tash8 wrote:posting the audio version real soon.

:worship:

where have u been man?? everything ok?
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