One of my best yet...(Revised)

[Enimee]

These days it seems, things,
are so stressed and deranged
so im dressing it plain, in between,
the rest is just gray with each breath that i take,
each scream, each restless complaint
it seams, this sweater is fake, stitched neat,
so each thread is the same
and i make an attempt to crotchet, but defeat
keeps sketching in shades
testing my faith, grinding my teeth,
till pain is etched in my face
cause ive discovered the truth, believe,
this was never something that i wanted to do
cause to me you were one of the few, serene, and so lovable too
but now i see, the ugly and rude, how can you tell me,
that this was nothin to you
this scene, this untouchable ruse, leavin me,
feelin so brushed off and misused
just loss and confused, speakin to your feet,
like i just coughed in your shoes
clenchin my teeth, knowin i cant talk when i chew,
to me, the cost was brand new
full price, all the added accessories,
glad that you'd travel west with me, happy you even left wit me
now im questioning the whole process, like was it me,
should i have talked less possessively
walked less excessivly, puttin mileage on these sneaks,
had your back even if hulk was to step to me
and this is what i get in return? i understand its hard, but well,
life goes on you live and you learn
knife in the back, i can handle the twist and the turn,
just dont take it back its deserved
its the last thing i have, this gift as it hurts,
i realize it symbolizes the love that i had in each verse
but now its gone, no longer any words to my song,
just the guitar, playin by itself
lyrics hangin from a belt, its too late now, im too far away,
built in, integrated in this hell
and im out

[Enimee]

its not really finished i kinda just peiced it together real quick, but i really like it so im def gonna take your advice and hopefully form a full song out of it soon

[Enimee]

bump

[Enimee]

thanks for the bump

[Enimee]

double bumpage? wow thanks bro ur the shit