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Sick Mind

Postby Jay-Hova » Sep 21st, '10, 23:45

A pretty old song I wrote like 1 month ago. I felt like taking a happy, silly but zany approach. And I know it might sound like a "Slim Shady style" song but it still has my own unique style/writing in it. And I changed about 4 lines right now so it's a little fresh :y:

Intrumental Aqui!

[Verse 1]
Do I really have the guts to take a life?,
What am I saying I don't care here rape my wife,
Just don't take my knife, or my damn girlfriend,
I'll leave the nasty bitch when the fucking world end,
Excuse her disgusting, body-dropping potty mouth,
Is she still a hotty while your bones be popping out,
Just breathe and smile pretend the blade's a camera,
Fuck a cut, I'll batter ya, til ya sta-sta-statter, ha?,
I'm sorry my crazy brain is how it is, mainly raw,
Not sane or plain, insainly mauled, can't blame me dawg,
I'm a bad motherfucker but they don't complain at all,
Fuck a chainsaw I kill and rape with a chain and saw,
Today I woke up with the need to start a massacre,
Blast and hurt, kick behinds yeah millions of asses hurt,
So bad the country will see an increase in plastic surg,
Sorry I act like this man but I was just bashed at birth,

[Hook]
Oh, don't mind me, I'm in my own zany world,
The only planet that doesn't spin and twirl, x2
A place for those who that do not give a shit,
So you ain't allowed in if your mind ain't sick, x2
Let loose and just get crazy in this place,
A dozen chicks, seven times the rapes, x2

[Verse 2]
When I get real furious my brain bang bangs,
When I get real furious with you, you hang hangs,
At a gay bar as I watch your corpse be buttfucked,
Vomiting semen while being told to shut up, (shut up!)
You know I'm a fair guy when kids fly as I steer by,
Bye bye to the clear sky, hope it's clear I,
I'm a friend if you on a roof, yelling don't care dive!,
But would you dare try?, no I love my dear life,
They say music isn't true but this is just as real,
As a short, black dude with long, soft hair to feel,
Pick me apart from the weak, yo start to believe,
I ain't that sensitive guy with a heart that's so deep.
If my heart is deep then it's because it's a blackhole,
You know I'm an asshole, but only when I rap though?,
No the cruel truth is that I hate everyone equally,
Fuck what you people see, this still isn't the evil me,

[Hook]
Oh, don't mind me, I'm in my own zany world,
The only planet that doesn't spin and twirl, x2
A place for those who that do not give a shit,
So you ain't allowed in if your mind ain't sick, x2
Let loose and just get crazy in this place,
A dozen chicks, seven times the rapes, x2

[Verse 3]
When I'm sixteen I'm gonna leave school forever,
Become a rapping rapist slash priest all together,
Then I can fuck bitches, children and the game up,
A hater of tame stuff, and any plain lame fuck,
Against any motherfucker supporting censorship,
Just wait for myself to finally fucking end your shit,
I love being explicit and if you can't stand bad words,
Then fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck you to you wack jerks,
I'ma be the most controversial act since gay sex,
I'll spit and burn a goddamn cross and stay blessed,
I should grow true horns, and kill some newborns,
Repeatedly stompin 'em, fuck blades I chew swords,
Many might say that I'm unethical and uncivilized,
But you never know you might be surprised,
Cause people are the opposite they truly may be,
If that statement is true what does that make me,

[Hook]
Oh, don't mind me, I'm in my own zany world,
The only planet that doesn't spin and twirl, x2
A place for those who that do not give a shit,
So you ain't allowed in if your mind ain't sick, x2
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Re: Sick Mind

Postby Jay-Hova » Sep 22nd, '10, 02:10

bumping.
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