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"Shadows" 3 verses no hook.

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Re: "Shadows" 3 verses no hook.

Postby classthe_king » Sep 27th, '10, 23:00

You should just put this over Mart 85's shadows.
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Re: "Shadows" 3 verses no hook.

Postby classthe_king » Sep 27th, '10, 23:07

SiiNiDE wrote:
classthe_king wrote:You should just put this over Mart 85's shadows.


Did you read it to that beat? Cos that's what it's written to, hahahah. I was debating on whether or not to use that on my EP (lease it, of course) or to use a different instrumental and create my own hook. But that beat is sick, so I may just use that.


Actually I didn't lol, but when you called it shadows it made me think of that and when I was reading it I thought it would fit on that beat lol. But that is an amazing beat. I have a song I'm goona rap on that.
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Re: "Shadows" 3 verses no hook.

Postby Rain Matrix » Sep 27th, '10, 23:39

awesome stuff, lyricists like you give rhymes a good name
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Re: "Shadows" 3 verses no hook.

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 2nd, '10, 05:00

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Re: "Shadows" 3 verses no hook.

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 2nd, '10, 05:36

Haha I didn't bump you, twat muffin, you were top of the list cause you bumped youreself. How's it feel to be wrong?
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Re: "Shadows" 3 verses no hook.

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 2nd, '10, 05:42

The glance I gave this steaming bag of Glad Bag Force flex tells me you have no structure or multis....childish piece of work here
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