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Smile for the camera

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Smile for the camera

Postby J Roc » Sep 28th, '10, 23:52

Tinkerbell Willl Stay With Peter, Ur Chasing 'Fairy Tales' Without Make Believing
U Joke-Around but If Gangstas 'Hold-U-Down' It Was To Take a Beating
Ask Me Who I Call For Some Sex? Ur Girls My Treasure So i Polish Her 'Chest'
My Style-Is-'Hot' So I picked up the 'Climate & Dropped' So u can Falll To Ur Death (Climb it )
I Think Ur all Premature, U sit-Back & Spit-Wack Then Drop 1 Measly Verse
I'lll Fish-These-People Then Get-My-'Eagles' To Eat These 'Worms'
Were Sending U Threats, I Giggle After Every Message Get Sent
U think u-nicer till u find out Lucypher Is the Devil in Flesh
The most Electrifying Man .. Cuz I Was 'Shocked' When PK Said....
Nothing U Idiots Derdy's Dead.. He's Locked In My Basement (Where'd That Come From?)
Susan Meant the World , How could she Reject the Pearls?
Steven's a Pimp.... Where do u think i met my girl??

Teeee Haytch Seeeeeeeeee
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Re: Smile for the camera

Postby Weather Man » Sep 29th, '10, 06:22

This was sick .
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Re: Smile for the camera

Postby Rain Matrix » Sep 29th, '10, 15:44

good job with the excessive but decent use of punches
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