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Sentus & McZu-Rise with Fire

Postby classthe_king » Oct 3rd, '10, 22:22

(Mc Zu)
I’m going to take you on a ride to another level
Levels above the norm, hellish on the path you can call this Devil
Not devilish, eyes looking like a temperament in sequel
I’ll make you see your afterlife in 3D like Resident Evil
Yes, I went forth in the past now I’m neck a neck with lethal
Aspects, these doors open, ‘cause for now I paused
It seems I caused my lyrical faucet of high cost
To regulate this floor while I’m just being playful
See, I reside in a silhouette without a label
My verses in guillemets, ‘cause I get quoted by Angels
We have the same roll but a different script
So what differs is what our pencils script
A fire, protecting my mental fitness, in this
Tenth core misfit that is with me while the night slumbers
Call me Nas, no longer room for a ninth wonder
‘bout to get back in the elevator ‘cause you’re right under
My burning apartment...

(Sentus)
Some wonder if Sentus is the foulest that’s livin
Well you can throw in the white towel it’s a given
After a battle with me, all rappers can barely stand
Broken by the malice carried in my salivary glands
You soft as dirt so you all should move off ya perch
Cause none beats me like when I goof off at church
My rise shrouds the Earth like the eruption of Toba
The power makes you feel like you stuck in a nova
You fuck up and it’s over, I’m here takin great back
You’re Ray Wallace mc’s; only makin fake tracks
When I break and slay raps I produce a sonic quake
That causes a huge shift in the Earth’s tectonic plates
And no one is safe cause my rage covers the globe
I float around in a space ship that hovers and probes
Until I have a million pawns tossed in my hands
And the world you know is gone, lost in the sand
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Sentus & McZu-Rise with Fire

Postby classthe_king » Oct 4th, '10, 02:26

Thanks Steve :worship:

I'll take that into consideration
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Re: Sentus & McZu-Rise with Fire

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 6th, '10, 01:47

1st of all how the fuck this got only 2 views??? lol I can always tell if it' Zu's writing. Its so unique ya know the word choice is great as always. I like it just because you put resident evil in it :D 'Tneth core misfit' I liked that too. Yo Class has the prettiest lines. they are always like perfectly semetrical lmao helps the flow and all just givin ya shit haha But yeah man both of you are dope as fuck and I liked the fire concept and stuff was dope guys
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Sentus & McZu-Rise with Fire

Postby Xray » Oct 6th, '10, 17:22

Top TR collab.

Zu you had some lines in the beginning where it wasn't up to par, than middle and so on got on and it was fire. Class your lines are mad erotic. I wanna have sex with your perfect structured ass rhymes. No homo.
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Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Re: Sentus & McZu-Rise with Fire

Postby classthe_king » Oct 6th, '10, 23:03

Haha thanks alot :worship:
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Re: Sentus & McZu-Rise with Fire

Postby classthe_king » Oct 10th, '10, 17:50

Buuuuuuuuuuuump
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Re: Sentus & McZu-Rise with Fire

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 14th, '10, 07:03

Thats wat you get for bumpin class lmao
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Sentus & McZu-Rise with Fire

Postby classthe_king » Oct 15th, '10, 20:02

Haha, that's the only feed I get :(


My punches are too far over peoples heads :shifty:
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Re: Sentus & McZu-Rise with Fire

Postby mcZu » Oct 15th, '10, 20:05

I need to say that.. I bet nobody caught that ''Went forth/Resident Evil'' wordplay.. Went forth = Wentworth. The actor that played in Resident Evil, Wentworth Miller. There is even more.
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Re: Sentus & McZu-Rise with Fire

Postby classthe_king » Oct 15th, '10, 20:12

Zu is really over peoples heads lmao
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Re: Sentus & McZu-Rise with Fire

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 15th, '10, 21:31

lol I never knew he was in that movie. Aint that the guy from prison break
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Sentus & McZu-Rise with Fire

Postby mcZu » Oct 15th, '10, 21:38

Yeah, he played Micheal Scofield in Prison Break. Hence the whole elevator theme, they did escape in the first season by using the elevator, and a hose, to break the bars in front of the window. I quote, ''these doors open'', ''lyrical faucet'', ''to regulate this floor/flow'', etc.. ''reside in a silhouette'', they had to stay lowkey to not get caught again, hence reside in a silhouette. Just a playful (yes, I quote msyelf) litle extended metaphor I had going on as basis for the verse.
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Re: Sentus & McZu-Rise with Fire

Postby Stavros » Oct 15th, '10, 21:40

mcZu wrote:Yeah, he played Micheal Scofield in Prison Break. Hence the whole elevator theme, they did escape in the first season by using the elevator, and a hose, to break the bars in front of the window. I quote, ''these doors open'', ''lyrical faucet'', ''to regulate this floor/flow'', etc.. ''reside in a silhouette'', they had to stay lowkey to not get caught again, hence reside in a silhouette. Just a playful (hence, I quote msyelf) litle extended metaphor I had going on as basis for the verse.


That's the dumbest fucking thing I've ever read. Why would you do that?
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Re: Sentus & McZu-Rise with Fire

Postby mcZu » Oct 15th, '10, 21:43

Stavros wrote:
mcZu wrote:Yeah, he played Micheal Scofield in Prison Break. Hence the whole elevator theme, they did escape in the first season by using the elevator, and a hose, to break the bars in front of the window. I quote, ''these doors open'', ''lyrical faucet'', ''to regulate this floor/flow'', etc.. ''reside in a silhouette'', they had to stay lowkey to not get caught again, hence reside in a silhouette. Just a playful (hence, I quote msyelf) litle extended metaphor I had going on as basis for the verse.


That's the dumbest fucking thing I've ever read. Why would you do that?

Dumbest? Hmm, if having triple double meanings in a verse means dumb, then you're probably right. Why? Because I'm an artist, I express myself that way. It aint like I put in weeks of thought in it, this is something I cook up in 20 min tops.
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Re: Sentus & McZu-Rise with Fire

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 15th, '10, 21:48

If I remembered all of that then I might have all of that. Of course I'm like 5'8 so alot goes over my head :D
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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