Thoughts Of The Abort

[ShaBruv]

The consequences of my actions we'rent on my mind

just so young and so foolish staying on my grind

Didn't think about the human , didnt think of feotus

just thought of myself, and how you never gon' to meet us

i went back to the days when my daddy would beat us

Didnt want that to be you because i knew that would defeat us

now im wondering what i did and what i shoulda done

coulda been here with a baby, a daughter or son,

instead i was a coward i thought i should run,

biggest regret of my life, i slaughtered someone

Now i'm stuck in a cell, and you're in the stars,

Son i have failed you , now i speak through these bars



Now i go to the bible to try find some faith

Try confess all my sins, repent my mistake,

But nuthin's gonna change i put an end to your existence

Payed to abort, may not have happened without persistance

We could've of got by, we could have at least tried,

i killed an unborn baby and never looked in his eyes,

Those eyes never saw the sky and wonders of the life

wonder why i did it i blundered my wife,

we coulda been a trio coulda been the muskateers

But we were a duet , now you're just fallen tears

Here i sit in this cell silently drinking my beer

Never make the same mistake and have that level of fear

i'm 14 btw

[Robbie G]

It wasn't bad, I enjoyed it. For the most part the rhyming was pretty simple and overall it was a little cliche but still not bad.

Keep it up.

[ShaBruv]

Thanks man, it wasnt spposed to be the most lyrical piece, but yeah it was pretty basic

and btw here's my inspiration for the song


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2bQG8v8kTGs

thanks for the feedback

[Ka0t1c]

pretty good man, you got the heart in your music which is rare these days