Devil in a New Dress Freestyle (Written)

[mcZu]

I met her in a bar, told her I make music
Bar the stupid mainstream façade, ‘cause that’s stupid
My bars by far, far ahead of today’s rap music
And I’m no producer, but I make real Arab music
Yeah, you slick, in a good way she told me
Positive mob thing, dangerous love in the city, brother
And she said her heart throbbing like Fifty’s mother
Did he utter, or slur? While he recording retro
I told her money never sleeps, ask Gordon Gekko
According dress codes dress less to impress was the motto
I was hoping on those digits like the lotto
I told her you know I don’t pull Llamas, you
Secured my strong safety in here, like Polamalu
She said, Zu let’s have fun, so I kissed her
She told me I drop more wisdom than Rev Run on Twitter
Listen, just to be with you, eyes started to glisten
I would walk a thousand miles, Vanessa Carlton blisters
I would miss you more than milk carton pictures
So pardon the lack of riches...


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[MakaveliTheDon]

Holy shit! This is too good. I usually don't get too impressed on text only but damn!

Ok, first of all the flow was immense, insane, massively great. This was very reminiscent of Royce's "Part of Me", same vibe, idk but that's a good thing; I love that song

You're style is very similar to Budden's and Royce's to me. I know you're a big Budden fan so that's no surprise though. The rhymes were very well delivered (text-wise of course), I know you weren't going for a super lyrical song so I appreciate the fact you made this more of how it turned out to be.

Overall 9.5/10. I wish i could tell you on what you could work on so I don't sound like an ass-kisser but I can't find a fault in this.

Very, very good man, keep it up

[Fa-Q]

Love that Vanessa Carlton line

[Yah-hah]

AKA GORDON GEKKO hahahahahah I love it bro

[ThomasJ]

I loved everything about this!
The flow was on point,the multies were there,punches,everything.

And I’m no producer, but I make real Arab music

lol!

Side note : You remind me of Joe Budden a LOT.
Not saying that's bad,'cause he's an amazing rapper.

[mcZu]

Thanks for the comments, people. Appreciate it!

[mcZu]

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