New rhyme scheme

[Xray]

First verse of this new song I'm working on. It's like a "style on em" track.
Flows to 90 bpm beats.

I got more lines connecting than your palm
Nokia with a phone, and chainsaw your arm
Got you shook like the horns of a taurus
Cause when I shine, I'm like the eye of the Horus
You fags bitin' a Petter Pan chorus
I bite an elephants tusk, piss on a walrus
You need a pharmacist to build you this high
I'm dropping more towers than a Builderberg guy
I am the evil in a halocaust
You're like the victim in the work of gods
Smacking fly fuckers till they turn to moths
Wacking more poles on you than a Robocop
I'll leave you light headed like you fucking Hulk Hogan
Demons in me like I am The Omen
Break your index off if your rapping soft
You see chopped fingers in my cabin draws

Feedback.

[classthe_king]

That was sick man, loved the rhymes.

[Mahmoud48]

i cant tell u how many times i heard that saddam punchline
other then that its amazing

[Xray]

i cant tell u how many times i heard that saddam punchline
other then that its amazing

I'm giving worse punishment than Puns and Saddam*

Thanks for the advice bro. Luckily I haven't recorded this yet, so I can edit.

Good looks to Class and Steven. Props.

[Xray]

Nevermind Saddam punches...changed.

Nokia with a phone, and chainsaw your arm*

[Block]

I don't notice a change bro, lol.

[Xray]

LOLZ.

It's gonna have to do. Otherwise I'm just gonna end up in a writers block...

[Fa-Q]

Haha love that Hulk Hogan line....good drop Xray, you should drop more

[Ka0t1c]

fuckin pretty smooth cool flow the way i rapped it, draws should be drawers, i dont know if u did that on purpose for reading the flow properly but i enjoyed this, too bad it was so short, i wanted to keep rapping more of this!

[macdaddy019967]

wow this shit was nice
I can see I have my work cut out for me
good shit Xray

[Drama Setter]

Awesome drop Sajjad .

[AfterLyfe207]

These are some of the illest punchlines I've heard. "You fags bitin' a Petter Pan chorus
I bite an elephants tusk, piss on a walrus" Keep em comin'

[Stavros]

These punches must have went over my head...