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Steve Spag - I've Told Myself (Moved To Audio)

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Steve Spag - I've Told Myself (Moved To Audio)

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 8th, '10, 01:23

Recorded...

Released @ viewtopic.php?f=38&t=99631
Last edited by Steve Spag on Oct 9th, '10, 02:50, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Steve Spag - I've Told Myself

Postby classthe_king » Oct 8th, '10, 01:26

I don't think thats the point of this new feeding system...

Really liked the verse though, I related to it a lot.
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Re: Steve Spag - I've Told Myself

Postby Solace » Oct 8th, '10, 01:37

i don't respect you you big headed booze face
and i won't protect you anymore you douche bag
you neglected me too much, like a tooth ache


I thought that was pretty wack tbh. It sounded like a 3 year old son trying to insult his deadbeat father. Lmfao. The rest was pretty decent, I can hear it perfectly done in your style of rapping. Great opening and ending lines too, very effective. :y:
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Re: Steve Spag - I've Told Myself

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 8th, '10, 02:47

Glad you can relate Class, if my lyrics can help mend any wounds I'm more than happy.

LOL @ Solace! Didn't expect that, haha. Glad you like the verse homie!!

Keep the feed coming!
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Re: Steve Spag - I've Told Myself

Postby Emadyville » Oct 8th, '10, 05:22

Was this the same beat I used on my new song "I've Told Myself" :sweating:

I liked the sorta random feel of this too, would like to hear it :y:
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Re: Steve Spag - I've Told Myself

Postby DƎRDYPK » Oct 8th, '10, 05:38

It was pretty cool
while I was reading threw to myself I thought the flow slipped a lil at some spots
but that's probably because your style is different from most people on here
I agree with Solace on the big headed booze face part being a lil wack though
seems like something you wrote because you were maybe stuck & couldn't think of anything
but I also agree with Class on feeling this cause I can relate too (bitches I tell ya :shakehead: )
I'm really interested in hear it on audio though :b:
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Re: Steve Spag - I've Told Myself

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 8th, '10, 05:44

Thanks for the positive feed guys. Emady, I didn't even know you had a track to that, I just peeped it and thought it was pretty sick!

@D3RDYPK, I wasn't stuck, I just felt that those were the appropriate things to say, lol. Like you said...bitches.

I'll probably record this song once I finish it and I'll be sure to leak it for you guys!
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