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10:10:10 10/10/10

Postby mcZu » Oct 10th, '10, 22:35

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I wrote this at 10:10:10 today, hence the title. Written to a LifeandDeath beat, feedback is appreciated. The beat is called Seizure Of Power.

The minute the thinking starts
I’ll be waiting for the end like Linkin Park
A thousand suns at the sky
One moon, a thousand guns and lies
Thou sons and wives... daughters
And fathers illuminate the night’s waters
Mother-nature’s water broke
Giving birth to a slaughtered hope
We’re past the stroke, gasping for air
And it seems we’re casting for heirs
Such things are errors in faith
Humanity is in a late shift with
Racism while floating at a fast pace, this
Take system is a mellow lotus
Resembling everything that’s xenophobic
How long can we cope with
A society where people are helpless
Humility isn’t thinking less of yourself
But to think of yourself less
Our wealth checks our health tests
To some lives are just like a math test
Our paths blessed with dignity
So look for the serendipity in serenity
Scenes filled with synergy
To make up a coherent trinity
Of hope..
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Re: 10:10:10 10/10/10

Postby mcZu » Oct 10th, '10, 22:41

Edited with a link to the beat.
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Re: 10:10:10 10/10/10

Postby classthe_king » Oct 10th, '10, 22:50

This was amazing dude :o
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: 10:10:10 10/10/10

Postby mcZu » Oct 10th, '10, 23:05

Thanks, Classy, appreciate it!
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Re: 10:10:10 10/10/10

Postby mcZu » Oct 15th, '10, 21:53

Bumpeezzy
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