Open Call Out

[carvethesnow]

7 lines
3 votes or 1 KO to win

[Evanz19]

ummmmmmmm im new to this site and i doubt ill win but fuck it ill accept and give it a try.

[carvethesnow]

ha same yer well go !!

[carvethesnow]

ok im here. u call ur self evanz-nineteen/
compared to me ur like a pacific sardine/
ull live in hiding after u recive this pounding/
u went for men when u were rebounding/
ha and they even denied u and left u standing/
im bringin u down to a crash landing/
my attacks are unforseseen/
now ive knocked u down to evanz-eighteen.

ha its my first battle

[Evanz19]

I entered this battle to fuck up some gangstas,
but now im here all i find is some little wanksta,
but fuck it im here now trying to get some paper,
get rich or die tryin, your dead now adios see you later,
okay that was some good tough talk,
im not going into hiding so now your fucked dawg,
i cant even your fucked up little remember your name,
Evanz19 is standing so your fucked and your out of the game.

lol dw im only here to improve not make enemies.

[Evanz19]

lol just realised we both did 8 lines o wel its better for the structure anyway.

[Evanz19]

and i was meant to say hiding not hid. Im bad at typing soz.

[carvethesnow]

o well yer it went better for the structure

u can edit ur spellin mistakes if u want!!

well lets see the votes

[Evanz19]

has my reply come up coz it hasnt on my screen.

[Evanz19]

Hope it has.

[Evanz19]

Also if you can you need to put in the title open for votes or something so people will know to vote.

[Evanz19]

Also you need to put in the title open for votes or something so people will know to vote.

[carvethesnow]

k i figured out how this works im gunna post an new thread in rap battles

CTS vs Evanz19

then we both need to post our battle there so ppl can vote
k