open call out (10 lines)

[Greeeeeeg69]

Usual rules. just 10 lines

[The Toy Soldier]

Usual rules. just 10 lines

ill go another round

[Greeeeeeg69]

if no other takers then yeah idc. wana battle somwon else

[picture me rollin]

itz time 2 get this shit started.i have no emotionz im 2 cold hearted.ima kill u slow until u have departed.u beatin me soundz 2 fuckin retarted.call me da lyrical jack da ripper.when im done killin u throw ur body into da wood chipper.so bow down 2 me b4 u die.n accept ur fate cuz ur whole life`s a lie.i killed u n i didnt even have 2 try.im da most viciouz muthafucka outta da chi.

[The Toy Soldier]

itz time 2 get this shit started.i have no emotionz im 2 cold hearted.ima kill u slow until u have departed.u beatin me soundz 2 fuckin retarted.call me da lyrical jack da ripper.when im done killin u throw ur body into da wood chipper.so bow down 2 me b4 u die.n accept ur fate cuz ur whole life`s a lie.i killed u n i didnt even have 2 try.im da most viciouz muthafucka outta da chi.

is it pronounced Cheye?

either way you don't post it here this is just for call out
he also didnt accept yet
jack the ripper...thats new but u dont gotta go all emo
and u should use transitions better

[Darkblade44431]

yo
too damn lazy to write too, bite too
steppin up to a brotha like you in game, fight-lose
trippin on your own lyrics, "aight dude!", not through!
Seein' you right through, can't see through me, you're a blind dude,
when it comes to rappin i win times two, innocent but lied to,
sendin it like i do, not a reality, the factuality is the infinite predicaments with haiku's,
diss me back if you wanna hear some lied truth,
i'll go ahead and tell ya, what haven't you been tied to?
santa isn't real, and neither is the easter bunny,
plan ta...give up appeals and talkin to some nice honeys,
too bad that won't happen, gave up your real rhymes tryin to get a deal for some wack rappin.

lmao, how u like that? ha ha, sorry..i was bored....use this!!!

[The Toy Soldier]

yo
too damn lazy to write too, bite too
steppin up to a brotha like you in game, fight-lose
trippin on your own lyrics, "aight dude!", not through!
Seein' you right through, can't see through me, you're a blind dude,
when it comes to rappin i win times two, innocent but lied to,
sendin it like i do, not a reality, the factuality is the infinite predicaments with haiku's,
diss me back if you wanna hear some lied truth,
i'll go ahead and tell ya, what haven't you been tied to?
santa isn't real, and neither is the easter bunny,
plan ta...give up appeals and talkin to some nice honeys,
too bad that won't happen, gave up your real rhymes tryin to get a deal for some wack rappin.

lmao, how u like that? ha ha, sorry..i was bored....use this!!!

nice ryhmes but the lines seem too long (this is just too me) but then again i do read them slow

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this is a warning next call out thread i see like this is deleted, rhymes dont go in here, take cypha's to creative writing

[Robbie G]

if you want to battle accept and set up a thread.

[The Toy Soldier]

if you want to battle accept and set up a thread.

yeah i know i stated that but no one listens to the crtazy noob apparently haha

[Darkblade44431]

lol thanks.

[Greeeeeeg69]

so who the fuck am i battling?

[The Toy Soldier]

so who the fuck am i battling?

apparently both of them because they already responded.

[Greeeeeeg69]

yo then both of ya repost your shit in the battle section and ill put mine up

[The Toy Soldier]

yo then both of ya repost your shit in the battle section and ill put mine up

ur supposed to start the thread