Call out on Z em

[Spyder]

Ive read some stuff, ur raps look tight but i think i can take ya so
12 lines 5hit ko accept?


FLOW
STRUCTURE
PUNCHES
MULTIES
RHYMES
VOCAB
COMPLEXITY
NAMEPLAY
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off)

never done this before so help me out lol

[Slim Zaddy]

okay i'm in

[Slim Zaddy]

drop yours .. then i'm after you

[Spyder]

get up wigger but you cant, go figure
when you get hit by my clinched fingers
it will be like a trigger hit-chya.
You know damn well I get this party started
I get all the honies and you just act retarted
ill steal your lunch, friends, bitch and electronics.
I'm an ill murderer, TRshady's neva herd-of-ya
hide the mudrer weapon in the furniture.
Ive seen all your raps i must say there plain,
Ive heard betta from birdman and lil wayne.
the complexity of this rap wil split you in half
not even all the kings horses and men could put u back

now u, upmost respect playa

[Slim Zaddy]

get up ***** but you cant, go figure
when you get hit by my clinched fingers
it will be like a trigger hit-chya.
You know damn well I get this party started
I get all the honies and you just act retarted
ill steal your lunch, friends, bitch and electronics.
I'm an ill murderer, TRshady's neva herd-of-ya
hide the mudrer weapon in the furniture.
Ive seen all your raps i must say there plain,
Ive heard betta from birdman and lil wayne.
the complexity of this rap wil split you in half
not even all the kings horses and men could put u back

now u, upmost respect playa

nah dont post here ,, make a new thread in Rap battles forum ,, and write your name vs me ,, then write your drop ,, which i can see it's hot

[gutawafang]

hmmm, i cant wait for z em's sick hit-back.

[Slim Zaddy]

hmmm, i cant wait for z em's sick hit-back.

i have finished it , but i'm just waitin for him ,, to make a thread ,