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Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Innovation » Aug 11th, '11, 17:26

Amadeo wrote:There are plenty things you're highlighting which I'm sure weren't intentional or even rhymes in the first place. Here are Music Box multis fixed:

You hear the beat As it makes ya not want to go to sleep
I knock on Dakota's door It's locked so I go to creep
'round the back with binoculars/not because (not because I want to peep)
But because I'm hungry she smells like taco's I want to eat
Visions of hot chocolaty marshmallows all so sweet
With sugar plums, oh look, here comes ( Marshall he's on your street)
He's placing hot smoldering charcoals beneath your feet
Now walk on 'em, he's dancing with carcasses cheek to cheek
Like a Thanksgiving turkey. A holiday ham
Cinnamon sprinkled on toast, strawberry marmalade jam
Flavor my favorite graham crackers with Jon Benet Rams
I guess a modern day Jack the Ripper Is all that I am


I'm pretty sure marmalade jam/Jon Bernet Ram is totally intentional. I don't see many rhymes being unintentional, he is one of the best to ever do it.
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Innovation » Aug 13th, '11, 23:42

Quite a few songs will be added very soon! LWTYL will be included. "Oh no! MAINSTREAMZ" Nah, it's a dope track lyrically and is written very, very well.
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Aug 14th, '11, 00:29

Innovation wrote:Quite a few songs will be added very soon! LWTYL will be included. "Oh no! MAINSTREAMZ" Nah, it's a dope track lyrically and is written very, very well.

when though?

i fucking love this thread.
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Innovation » Aug 14th, '11, 00:39

Devil'sAdvocate wrote:
Innovation wrote:Quite a few songs will be added very soon! LWTYL will be included. "Oh no! MAINSTREAMZ" Nah, it's a dope track lyrically and is written very, very well.

when though?

i fucking love this thread.


Whenever Menzo posts them. I send them off to him so he can edit them in as he started the thread. He's done quite a few including some Relapse songs so we're in for a treat. :y:

And thanks man, it's good to know you're enjoying the highlighted rhymes! :worship:
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Sam. » Aug 14th, '11, 11:37

Marshal Mathers ? :angry: been a lng time since i requested it .
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Sam. » Aug 15th, '11, 11:16

That makes me appreciate "Hit Me With Your Best Shot" even more . :worship:
MCSam wrote:Marshal Mathers ? :angry: been a lng time since i requested it .

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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby MikeNUFC » Aug 15th, '11, 18:37

No offense but you lot highlight stuff that doesn't even rhyme. I mean, you're really claiming that these lot rhyme:

fuzzy feeling/never hit em/thing to hurt em

bad as mine is/just as blinded

I'm stubborn, evil, and insensitive/I ain't budged, not even an inch since then

what can I say/stuck in this way

I was right/fucking died

missed your boat/just too old

tendo game/show restraint/lied again
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Master Chief » Aug 15th, '11, 19:39

MikeNUFC wrote:No offense but you lot highlight stuff that doesn't even rhyme. I mean, you're really claiming that these lot rhyme:

fuzzy feeling/never hit em/thing to hurt em

bad as mine is/just as blinded

I'm stubborn, evil, and insensitive/I ain't budged, not even an inch since then

what can I say/stuck in this way

I was right/fucking died

missed your boat/just too old

tendo game/show restraint/lied again

Besides what Menzo said.

Missed your boat/JIST too old <--- rhyme.

"Just" can also be pronounced as "jist" or "jest".
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby MikeNUFC » Aug 15th, '11, 23:22

Menzo wrote:I'm stubborn, evil, and insensitive/I ain't budged, not even an inch since then


stubborn, evil, and insensitive/budged, not even an inch since then

^That works. Just. Still forced as fuck (especially the end) and the syllables don't match but the "I ain't" and "I'm" are pointless being there.

what can I say/stuck in MY way


LOL I'm talking about "what" and "stuck". Even the way he forces rhymes in that verse that it doesn't work.

@Master Chief - I'll concede that one. Haven't listened to The Sauce in ages.
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby MikeNUFC » Aug 16th, '11, 00:27

Menzo wrote:You're wrong. The way he says, "I'm" can match the way he says, "I ain't". Have you even listened to it since its leak?

Yes, I listened to it just then. He doesn't alter the pronunciation of "I'm" at all. You could possibly argue he rhymes just "I" with "I'm" but that fucks up syllables even more.

LOL you spelled the fuckin lyrics wrong, I was showing you your mistakes. And I'm 100% convinced your accent fucks up a lot of the rhymes here, cuz it fits perfectly to my ears.

Maybe my ears are fucked. I hear Eminem's accent and 'stuck' and 'what' don't rhyme.

EDIT: Listened about 5 times and there's no way that rhymes.
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Aug 16th, '11, 00:56

Geno wrote:How the hell does it NOT rhyme? He even enunciates it the same exact way.

double stick tape / stuck in my ways / what can i say / (vege)table dick face etc

It all rhymes.

Still forced.
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Master Chief » Aug 16th, '11, 01:04

C.R.E.A.M wrote:
Geno wrote:How the hell does it NOT rhyme? He even enunciates it the same exact way.

double stick tape / stuck in my ways / what can i say / (vege)table dick face etc

It all rhymes.


double doesn't rhyme with "in"
stick doesn't rhyme with "my"

The first two rhymes are a bit of a reach cause the syllables don't match, but I get the rest cause he pronounced them something like "whut cun I say" and "tuble dick face" so they do rhyme.


My two cents.

The middle syllables of a multi don't matter.

Fire hose
Try to cope
I am dope

^ all those rhyme but (Fi)re does not rhyme with "to" or "am".
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby MikeNUFC » Aug 16th, '11, 01:06

What Master Chief said.

However, "stuck/what" doesn't rhyme.
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Aug 16th, '11, 01:08

stuck and what do rhyme,they sound very similar how i pronounce them.

what is pronounced "whut"
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby MikeNUFC » Aug 17th, '11, 14:12

Amadeo wrote:I can see where you're coming from, but Eminem often pronounces it as "whut" for the rhyme.


I've listened to that part on Hit Me With Your Best Shot about 10 times now and he doesn't alter the sound of 'what' enough to make it rhyme.

Menzo wrote:How the hell do YOU pronounce "what"?

WAT!?


What's my pronunciation got to do with it? I'm basing it on what I'm listening to.
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