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did eminem have simple rhyme schemes on infinite

Postby ronnie56 » Aug 2nd, '14, 16:18

im talking in terms of structure not the number of syllables he was rhyming.
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Re: did eminem have simple rhyme schemes on infinite

Postby alphadelta » Aug 2nd, '14, 19:02

Ayo, my pen and paper cause a chain reaction
To get your brain relaxing, the zany acting maniac in action
A brainiac in fact son, you mainly lack attraction
You look insanely whack with just a fraction of my track run
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Re: did eminem have simple rhyme schemes on infinite

Postby Mr.DGAF » Aug 2nd, '14, 22:41

Would say so. Take the verse above as an example.

alphadelta wrote:Ayo, my pen and paper cause a chain reaction
To get your brain relaxing, the zany acting maniac in action
A brainiac in fact son, you mainly lack attraction
You look insanely whack with just a fraction of my track run


The first line he's only rapping 11 syllables and the second he's rapping 18. That's a seven syllables difference alone. That's a touchdown and an extra point.

Secondly, he's only rapping 4 of those 11/18 syllables. That's downright mediocre. That number needs to be around 10 or 12.
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Re: did eminem have simple rhyme schemes on infinite

Postby SliK » Aug 3rd, '14, 02:05

Menzo wrote:Sorta. It was mostly:

AA
AB
BB
BC....

Probably didn't even take him very long to do it...still a good listen though.

He used to do internals a LOT, like:

Slim Shady, hotter than a set of twin babies
In a Mercedes bens with the windows up when the temp goes up
To the mid eighties

There are so many examples of rhymes like that in Forgot About Dre


Also things like:
I'm so bananas I'm showing up to your open casket
To fill it full of explosive gasses and close it back with
a lit match in it while I sit back and just hope it catches

Possibly even "lit match in it" / "sit back and just"
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Re: did eminem have simple rhyme schemes on infinite

Postby ronnie56 » Aug 3rd, '14, 04:40

Menzo wrote:Sorta. It was mostly:

AA
AB
BB
BC....

Probably didn't even take him very long to do it...still a good listen though.


or abab rhyme patterns
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Re: did eminem have simple rhyme schemes on infinite

Postby MistaVijilantee » Aug 3rd, '14, 05:16

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Re: did eminem have simple rhyme schemes on infinite

Postby AnnaSophiaRobbbbb » Aug 3rd, '14, 15:25

I don't remember where but I swear I saw his rhyme pattern on a Relapse song, and the chorus on its own was amazing. I think it might have been Stay Wide Awake.
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