eminem vs g rap better mc with rhyming

[ronnie56]

im going to say g rap honestly he is just too sick with rhyming imo

he been doing since the 80's in terms of rhyming and shit and just all out better rhymer then eminem to me


[Verse 1]
When I was five years old I realized there was a road
At the end I will win lots of pots of gold
Never took a break, never made a mistake
Took time to create cause there's money to make
to be a billionaire takes hard work for years
Some nights I shed a tear while I said a prayer
Been through hard times, even worked part time
In a Key Food store sweeping floors sometimes
I was sort of a porter taking the next man's orders
Breaking my back for a shack from headquarters
All my manpower for four bucks an hour
Took my time and wrote rhymes in the shower
Shoes are scuffed cause the road gets rough
But I'mma rock it cause my pockets ain't stuffed enough
All the freaks wouldn't speak cause my checks were weak
They would turn the other cheek so I started to seek
A way to get a play, and maybe one day
I'll be performing up a storm for a decent pay
No matter how it seems, I always kept the dream
All the girlies screamed and suckers get creamed
Dreamed about it for five years straight
Finally I got a break to cut my first plate
The road ain't yellow and it ain't no witches
My name is Kool G Rap, I'm on the road to the riches

[ronnie56]

I think Em rhymes more and better

how so.

[classthe_king]

i got em

This place is my house
I might as well erase my face with white out
Cause y'all can't see me like Mase's eyebrows
Where you at
Climbed out of a nice house
Through the front window and heard this guy shout
Hey that's my couch (bitch)
Pull a nine out during a rhyme bout
While I'm rippin' this shit, put a clip in it, spit five rounds
And murder you hoes worse than a convertible flipping vertical
Nose-first with the top off landing up-side down
Get tied down and duct-taped, fuck rape
I'd rather just hump a slut's leg wit my nuts shaved
Sway and Tech, two disk jockeys
Breaking so many freaking needles
I wonder if they inject

[ronnie56]

i got em

This place is my house
I might as well erase my face with white out
Cause y'all can't see me like Mase's eyebrows
Where you at
Climbed out of a nice house
Through the front window and heard this guy shout
Hey that's my couch (bitch)
Pull a nine out during a rhyme bout
While I'm rippin' this shit, put a clip in it, spit five rounds
And murder you hoes worse than a convertible flipping vertical
Nose-first with the top off landing up-side down
Get tied down and duct-taped, fuck rape
I'd rather just hump a slut's leg wit my nuts shaved
Sway and Tech, two disk jockeys
Breaking so many freaking needles
I wonder if they inject

em got simple rhyme schemes imo aaaa or abab

I only rock with fam'n
Plot plannin' niggas that cock cannons
Roll with the ox jammin' niggas doin' whole bids in the box standin'
8 niggas thats quick to hop in the van'n
Cock glocks and put the drops on the whole block gamblin'
Turn it to knots landin'
Gun shots got 'em scramblin'
Leavin' 4 cops to examine
The streets are frigid so i speak it vivid
Sleep it, love it, and live it
If you want one of these slugs i'm'a give it
And pop you 'till you drop liquid
Your days are numbered and i'm droppin' the digits
Bodies get sent to the chop shop like civics
All for poppin' up on the wrong blocks to visit
The wrong spot to risk it
Nothin' but hollow tops in the biscuits
Get helicopter lifted out your hot lizards
Keep it far from the child shit
.40 cal. spit
Runnin' with wild cliques
Dead you and beat the murder trial shit
12 valve whips
The strip is scorchin'
Flooded with drug enforcement lawmen
Strippin' your fortune
Shorties are like the statue of liberty, they stay liftin' the torch'n
Orphans that spit the fifth often
Mad chicks get abortions
Weak ones lay stiff in a coffin
Federal stakeouts, spots get raided
Shots get traded
Come in a lock everything rock related
Keepin' the cell blocks overly populated
Incarcerated scarfaces inoxicated
Bodies get operated
Some get chopped and faded
Leave 'em bleedin' in need for medical aid
For dough metal gets rasied
When shit gets hot it's hard to settle the blaze
The ghetto we praise.

[classthe_king]

kool g rap rhymed gud for his time but it is rly simple now imo usually just abcdefg

My nine is lifting ya, six feet when I spray rounds
Hit you with 12 shots in mid-air and four more on the way down
As eight strays graze through a kid's hair on the playground
You lay down on a stretcher (Don't get carried away now!)
No pun intended, just hop out of your whip
And leave it unattended before I whip out this gun and end it
Unless you want it dented with bullet holes any minute
Cause I can leave your Infinite full of those even if someone's in it
Snatch the airbag, hit the corner and park it
Corner the market, I got her tied up in a chair and gagged
Bitches get smacked and grabbed by the hair and dragged
Like cavewomen, while I'm gravedigging with Marilyn Mans'

[ronnie56]

kool g rap rhymed gud for his time but it is rly simple now imo usually just abcdefg

My nine is lifting ya, six feet when I spray rounds
Hit you with 12 shots in mid-air and four more on the way down
As eight strays graze through a kid's hair on the playground
You lay down on a stretcher (Don't get carried away now!)
No pun intended, just hop out of your whip
And leave it unattended before I whip out this gun and end it
Unless you want it dented with bullet holes any minute
Cause I can leave your Infinite full of those even if someone's in it
Snatch the airbag, hit the corner and park it
Corner the market, I got her tied up in a chair and gagged
Bitches get smacked and grabbed by the hair and dragged
Like cavewomen, while I'm gravedigging with Marilyn Mans'

bullshit a bunch of two and three syllable rhymes in their.

A mind designed to find a rhyme that's right on time
One step beyond and not behind the line
That separates dogs from divine

[classthe_king]

that's a simple rhyme m8

I'll shove a gun in ya grill, greasy and heated
Smothered in hot mustard
So when I feed it to you it's easy to eat it
You need to be immediately treated while you breathin'
Or you'll be leavin' the receivin' room this evenin' with Jesus

[ronnie56]

that's a simple rhyme m8

I'll shove a gun in ya grill, greasy and heated
Smothered in hot mustard
So when I feed it to you it's easy to eat it
You need to be immediately treated while you breathin'
Or you'll be leavin' the receivin' room this evenin' with Jesus

aaaa rhyme schemes and these don't match in syllable count

greasy and heated 5 syllables
feed it to you it's easy to eat it 10 syllables
leavin' the receivin' room this evenin' with Jesus 13 syllables
immediately treated while you breathin' 11 syllables

[yung rom]

that's a simple rhyme m8

I'll shove a gun in ya grill, greasy and heated
Smothered in hot mustard
So when I feed it to you it's easy to eat it
You need to be immediately treated while you breathin'
Or you'll be leavin' the receivin' room this evenin' with Jesus

aaaa rhyme schemes and these don't match in syllable count

greasy and heated 5 syllables
feed it to you it's easy to eat it 10 syllables
leavin' the receivin' room this evenin' with Jesus 13 syllables
immediately treated while you breathin' 11 syllables

uh..
easy to eat it (5)
evenin' with Jesus (5)
treated while breathin' (5) (basically)
feed, ea(sy), eat, leave, re(ceivin), eve(nin), (imm)e(diately), treat(ed), breath(in)

[ronnie56]

that's a simple rhyme m8

I'll shove a gun in ya grill, greasy and heated
Smothered in hot mustard
So when I feed it to you it's easy to eat it
You need to be immediately treated while you breathin'
Or you'll be leavin' the receivin' room this evenin' with Jesus

aaaa rhyme schemes and these don't match in syllable count

greasy and heated 5 syllables
feed it to you it's easy to eat it 10 syllables
leavin' the receivin' room this evenin' with Jesus 13 syllables
immediately treated while you breathin' 11 syllables

uh..
easy to eat it (5)
evenin' with Jesus (5)
treated while breathin' (5) (basically)
feed, ea(sy), eat, leave, re(ceivin), eve(nin), (imm)e(diately), treat(ed), breath(in)

um noo how u gonna disregard the other syllables like that's not apart of the syllable count.

can u even count syllables.

[classthe_king]

One step beyond and not behind the line 9 syllables
That separates dogs from divine 7 syllables

come at me m8

[ronnie56]

One step beyond and not behind the line 9 syllables
That separates dogs from divine 7 syllables

come at me m8

One step beyond and not behind the line 8 syllables
That separates dogs from divine 8 syllables

error it's really 8 syllables not 9

that se-pa-rates- dogs-from di-vine 8 syllables
step - bey-ond - and - not - be-hind - the 8 syllables

[classthe_king]

dat aint even a rhyme doe

[ronnie56]

dat aint even a rhyme doe

step vine
seprate behind

step beyond and not behind the line
That separates dogs from divine

how is this not a multi

[classthe_king]

I'm dead