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You Must Be Dreamin (Beat) *Feedback Wanted*

Postby TheHundred$ » Jul 23rd, '10, 22:37

http://limelinx.com/files/81f060e3e3b6a3b648fdefa5dc2a1229


Here are the verses I made : viewtopic.php?f=24&t=93761

Made this myself.

I have been listening to Tech Nine a lot lately so i got inspired to make this.

Not Mastered so please use headphones if you can.
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Re: You Must Be Dreaming (Beat) *Feedback Wanted*

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jul 23rd, '10, 22:51

some wicked drums are missing...
its almost like you just layed the bass with some kicks to emphasize it..
uh there's too much gun clickin goin on for me...
the melody and the hi hats are pretty well put...also the snare is nice to me...
its a basic beat so far...if you get me....so i think it could need a final touch..
like some highlights so the people can go ..."Woooo this right thuuurrr!!!"
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Re: You Must Be Dreaming (Beat) *Feedback Wanted*

Postby TheHundred$ » Jul 23rd, '10, 22:58

Thanks for your feedback brotha!

I am very very new to this, so I understand I need to fix things.

Its all trial and error, I havent mastered it yet so its very easy for me to change these things.
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Re: You Must Be Dreamin (Beat) *Feedback Wanted*

Postby Terry_M » Jul 24th, '10, 02:36

For me this is DOPE AS FUCK. Perhaps a few rough parts but this definitely reminds me of a Tech N9ne/Strange Music beat. Love it. :y:
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Re: You Must Be Dreamin (Beat) *Feedback Wanted*

Postby TheHundred$ » Jul 25th, '10, 13:05

Terry_M wrote:For me this is DOPE AS FUCK. Perhaps a few rough parts but this definitely reminds me of a Tech N9ne/Strange Music beat. Love it. :y:



Thanks man :)
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