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Re: 2 new beats

Postby RainMan44 » Mar 21st, '11, 06:15

They're both dope as hell :y:

You def got talent, keep at it :b:


You ever make beats for others to use?
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Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."




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Re: 2 new beats

Postby Steve Spag » Mar 21st, '11, 15:29

I really like the intro to Dusk but when the rest of the instruments kick in it kind of gets bland to me. It's weird, you either really kill a beat or it's not good at all (no hate though). It seems like you're just always picking the wrong instruments and when they're all matched up together it sounds too different for my liking. You are a good producer though so keep it up and I'm sure the bangers will outweigh the weaker beats soon!
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By the way, beats should be featured in The Studio section, not Audio.
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Re: 2 new beats

Postby Tash8 » Mar 21st, '11, 20:57

Dusk:
Ok, I really like the main melody, with a lil bit better mixing you could make that a sick part for the verse. The instrumental at :29 seconds in sounds off to me. This needs a break down, where the main melody stop and other maybe slower pattern melody comes in, the drums could drop to. Just an idea.

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ok this started out dope with the first 20 seconds like something really good, then you have this other sample come in which is completely off key (maybe it's just me i dunno but i feel like it's off) Very weird beat indeed but has potential. Also I noticed your drums between the beats as somewhat similar try changing them up.
if these are your throwaway beats, I can't wait for the ones that made the album. Props man

keep it up.
btw, if you got a chance, listen to Amnesia or Collie California! thanks.
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