k, I listened to both
Bum Shiv:
well, your mix is insanely loud, like insane. you gotta fix your mastering man. I like the chop, but your drum loop sample is not well mixed, sounds too out of the beat, needs power. And again, that stupid bum shiv tag ends ruining the whole mood. I like the pitch you kept and Yourse has a more Japanese feeling than Rise From The ashez.
Rise:
well, I didn't liked the intro, not because it sounds bad, but because it doesnt suit the rest of the beat, as for the rest, is perfect. the drums are perfectly mixed on the beat, the sample is very well post mixed and cleaned, a bit too repetitive, but its good that you added a couple switches some times.
Bum shiv has improved a lot, but I still think Rise wins this match as well.
vote: RISE FROM THE ASHEZ