No Sorrow - UPDATED X2

[Tash8]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/24497916e04f98/

NEW ONE, I REDID IT

EDIT AGAIN

[Ethos]

Um.... you say "no sorrow" I say "No go"

Its just too choppy for my ears. Everything is not on beat. i mean. it needs to be cleaned up and pronto. no hate. Im just giving you that constructive critism. the drums were nice though.

[IceAxe]

now, that i listen to it again...I realize it's kinda choppy, like Syanied said. And the violin thing didn't fit with the rest of the beat.

but the drums were good, keep workin

[Hadez]

i think wuts makin it choppy is the lengths of the notes... u hold and release ur notes at bad times, thus making the choppy effect and causing it to not flow well with itself.

[Tash8]

thanks for teh feed guys, so i listened to all you and redid it

please refeed

[mart85]

I didn't listen to the first version so I guess you adjusted it a lot, cause it doesn't sound choppy the melody is nice, but it was a bit repetitive, especially if it's looped for 3 minutes

but what you did was good

[Tash8]

^ thanks mart, that's what me and hadez were talking about yesterday is how to make less repetitive maybe add a lil violin here and stuff like that...

this is my second version actually


http://www.zshare.net/audio/24497916e04f98/

that's my third...

[randomghost]

its an ok beat ..but not my type ..good work on it ...u can do better