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2 new beats and 1 intro.....

Postby randomghost » Aug 19th, '07, 14:22

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Re: 2 new beats and 1 intro.....

Postby Tash8 » Aug 19th, '07, 22:41

the intro's melody is a bit too loud, but overall it has a lot of potential

Dark Vibe: why is the snare panned to the left? or what is that that's panned to the left.. the melody is aite but hte sudden stops and starts are annoying.

Remorse Instr: Intro seems to be out of Tune to me or something, it just sounds weird. but the pattern is good, btw there is a few off-keys.. ok i guess it's not an intro lol? why do you have the same pattern but diff instruments playing them at diff times? and no drums?

keep it up
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Re: 2 new beats and 1 intro.....

Postby randomghost » Aug 19th, '07, 23:32

Tash8 wrote:the intro's melody is a bit too loud, but overall it has a lot of potential

Dark Vibe: why is the snare panned to the left? or what is that that's panned to the left.. the melody is aite but hte sudden stops and starts are annoying.

Remorse Instr: Intro seems to be out of Tune to me or something, it just sounds weird. but the pattern is good, btw there is a few off-keys.. ok i guess it's not an intro lol? why do you have the same pattern but diff instruments playing them at diff times? and no drums?

keep it up
thanks for the feed tash....i will keep on workin hard...thanks again :flower:
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Re: 2 new beats and 1 intro.....

Postby mart85 » Aug 20th, '07, 00:04

dark vibe: drums are nice... the panned percussion sound is a little too panned I think, or maybe you could have another perc. sound but panned to the right, to make it sound more balanced :y: the strings are ok, they could be more tight, but they're ok

remorse: the melody is nice, but it would def need drums, bass etc... depending on what you wanted to do with this :sweating: ... the melody at 0:13 is off-key by the way :sweating:

intro: melody is nice, but like Tash said, I think it's a bit too loud, it would be better more in the background and have it blend with the rest :y:
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Re: 2 new beats and 1 intro.....

Postby randomghost » Aug 20th, '07, 16:51

mart85 wrote:dark vibe: drums are nice... the panned percussion sound is a little too panned I think, or maybe you could have another perc. sound but panned to the right, to make it sound more balanced :y: the strings are ok, they could be more tight, but they're ok

remorse: the melody is nice, but it would def need drums, bass etc... depending on what you wanted to do with this :sweating: ... the melody at 0:13 is off-key by the way :sweating:

intro: melody is nice, but like Tash said, I think it's a bit too loud, it would be better more in the background and have it blend with the rest :y:
thanks mart....for the feed :flower:
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