there's not a lot of melodic details/elements, but I have to say that the drums and the low synths sound really good, probably the best sounding beat you made so far... sounds like some timbo drums, with a little bit of Dre... kinda like that "Fire" beat from Curtis... Dre's beat wasn'T really more melodic than yours... but still, if you want to improve as a beatmaker I think it's important to always try to make the beat more complex/complete, this way you learn more... cause otherwise this would just be a real nice "supporting" beat for a club type of track... if that's what you were going for, that's cool, but like I said, it would need more to be a GREAT beat on its own
good job tho