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Final Thoughts

Postby Tash8 » Nov 18th, '07, 23:50

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default ... tent=music

It's a depressing type of beat.

I like this best out of all my beats because it changes my mood when I listen to it.

Thanks!

P.S. I haven't put this up for a free beat but it's not for any album, so if you'd like to use it please PM me!
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Re: Final Thoughts

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Nov 18th, '07, 23:53

could we use it for da Tr group tape ? :smoking:



sick beat btw, i love the melody but also the (rain or thunder type) sound goin over it, drums are nice aswell, defo one of your best
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Re: Final Thoughts

Postby Tash8 » Nov 18th, '07, 23:55

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:could we use it for da Tr group tape ? :smoking:



sick beat btw, i love the melody but also the (rain or thunder type) sound goin over it, drums are nice aswell, defo one of your best


thanks man, and that's definitely possible, just put it up on available beats..

but make sure whoever wants to use it PMs me, cuz i have an idea on how to use it.
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Re: Final Thoughts

Postby Ethos » Nov 19th, '07, 01:27

Oh dude i wanna feed on this but i think I'm gonna wait until the track comes out. that way I can give a good critism on how it should have sounded for the track you know? cuz sometimes things get changed for the finished product. are you cool with me feeding after thaat?
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Re: Final Thoughts

Postby Tash8 » Nov 19th, '07, 01:49

Syanied wrote:Oh dude i wanna feed on this but i think I'm gonna wait until the track comes out. that way I can give a good critism on how it should have sounded for the track you know? cuz sometimes things get changed for the finished product. are you cool with me feeding after thaat?


that's fine, but if you have any tips i should do before vocals get on it, that'd be great :sweating:
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Re: Final Thoughts

Postby Xray » Nov 19th, '07, 02:50

the strings fucked up the beat...the piano and shit is fucken awesome except the strings pissed me off...and drums worked nice too but strings should be removed :y:
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Re: Final Thoughts

Postby Tash8 » Nov 20th, '07, 02:33

Sajjad wrote:the strings fucked up the beat...the piano and shit is fucken awesome except the strings pissed me off...and drums worked nice too but strings should be removed :y:


hmm idk why, they sound fine to mee

anyways i'll see what other say

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Re: Final Thoughts

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Nov 20th, '07, 09:15

Tash8 wrote:
Sajjad wrote:the strings fucked up the beat...the piano and shit is fucken awesome except the strings pissed me off...and drums worked nice too but strings should be removed :y:


hmm idk why, they sound fine to mee

anyways i'll see what other say

thanks


tis like my lecturer says all the time, there's no right or wrong in music..just opinions :p lol
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Re: Final Thoughts

Postby IceAxe » Nov 20th, '07, 20:26

The drums were kinda strange. The pattern was good, but the actual sound was weird. The melodies were all pretty good.

One of your best imo, keep at it
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Re: Final Thoughts

Postby Tash8 » Nov 21st, '07, 20:42

IceAxe wrote:The drums were kinda strange. The pattern was good, but the actual sound was weird. The melodies were all pretty good.

One of your best imo, keep at it


thanks and my drums were weird. but i felt they fit.
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Re: Final Thoughts

Postby Phantom » Nov 21st, '07, 20:49

the kick drum is really distorted. i think the clap should be layered with a snare btw.

melody is aiight, kinda strange tho. doesnt seem to transition too well.

has potential but needs work IMO

good job
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Re: Final Thoughts

Postby mart85 » Nov 22nd, '07, 18:16

I already told you what I thought of that beat, but yeah, I think you should adjust the kick... maybe you could layer it with another kick that has more high frequencies in it, cause the one you have is a bit too low IMO

but yeah, good job on this beat, real cool :y:
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Re: Final Thoughts

Postby Ethos » Nov 25th, '07, 19:22

Yes I can finally listen. sorry for the delay I've been trying to hear this to give feed but soundclick wasn't working. anyways my feed

I liked the feeling and melodies but I think that you need a better kick. the piano should have been panned, and if it already is then a little more would do. and those strings you can barely hear them in the actual track but in the begining it needs to be worked on more. I like the flute btw. Overall good job :y:
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Re: Final Thoughts

Postby Tomega » Dec 11th, '07, 21:26

I must see you got talent, you have the music in you
You have the ear for details.. you know just where to put the right kick and clap, but i think your drum lines could flow better and it's easy to do..
Just add hihats on every count (or 2) ts ts ts ts ts

I never did it until 2 months ago and it sounds better!! more professional..
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Re: Final Thoughts

Postby Tash8 » Dec 12th, '07, 02:22

opps i forgot about this, thanks for tyhe feed everyone

and Tomega thanks man,, I usually never like using hi hats on emotional tracks because like mcmaybe said about a bass, it could ruin it.

my main problem with everything is mixing and i have trouble making a unique drum line

but thanks man, i'll make sure to do it on my next beat..
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